jetz

Mar 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Truth

Truth

Creeping silently within the shadows
      Afraid of what I might find
         Yet unable to turn back
           Seeking out the truth
             Knowing it is within
               Wishing it wasn't
                        You.

— jetz, Mar 13, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Really. Really a great

Really. Really a great little poem, standing on its own. Love it. ~A (love your new avatar too.) "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Jetz

Love new pic. Your poem is awesome. Truth,ah. Awesome. Love to you and yours. Lyz XX

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Lyz, Hope that all

Thanks Lyz, Hope that all is well with you. I noticed you had been absent for a time. Once again, thanks. Jetz

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

All is well

Thank u. Keep them comin, the poems that is, lol. Love Lyz. XX

Lenny of Cohen

16 years 2 months ago

Bravo!

Esoteric delight! Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny

jim

16 years 2 months ago

Great

What a nice little poem this is. lovely write. Jim

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Jim, Glad you liked it.

Hi Jim, Glad you liked it. I don't write too many 'little' ones... Thanks for the read. Sue

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks folks , for taking

Thanks folks , for taking the time to read, and respond. Licia, you are a special friend, and I truly appreciate that. Thanks my friend. Eph, You too, guy. Thanks.. Sue

Lenny of Cohen

16 years 2 months ago

Some of

my best writing has come when I am at the bottom, when I am in the darkest abyss, brings forth great imagery; trick is to guage how far one actually delves. I really feel this piece of fine writing - and look this is my second post here! Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Lenny, Forgive me for

Hi Lenny, Forgive me for not responding properly after your first post. What you say has been true for me as well. I often find 'dark writes' capture more of me...too much info, eh? Thank you for reading and leaving a reply. Not only once, but twice!!! Sue

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Eph, You are quite the

Hi Eph, You are quite the character!!!! A perverted one at that! Thanks for popping in again!!!! Sue

hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

Good write

but left me wanting more.But some poems find thier own endings. Keep up the good work. Take Care. huey

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Not to worry Huey, Most

Not to worry Huey, Most times I ramble on and on. Short writes from me are few and far between. Thanks for the visit and the comment. Sue

arja

16 years 2 months ago

..reminds me Sherlock

..reminds me Sherlock Holmes! ..a case to solve a mystery at hand.. or lovers, perhaps there's a mistress (or its the other way around).. or a suspense, you'll never know what you'll discover.. ..love this piece..makes my think, to unravel the truth..;)

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Alone, Thanks for the

Hi Alone, Thanks for the read and for your take on this. If I told you what inspired this, you'd probably be surprised just how close you were to the truth. Not something I'm comfortable in explaining though. Thanks for your response. Sue

arja

16 years 2 months ago

..really?! but I won’t

..really?! but I won't ask what it is (not just yet) since your not comfortable about it.. hope writing it down releases the emotion (of hate / sadness perhaps?).. sorry for the late reply.. ;)