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Mar 13, 2010
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Akasha
Droplets in living waters
stretching to eternity.
Opposite, the same, synchronous
intricately and intractably intertwined.
Each whole a portion of undivided entirety
winking in and out,
quickly, ineffably,
unable to keep fast a single moment.
Thoughts and deeds,
even while being processed
and consummated,
have elapsed. Become past
back over there.
Frozen. Intact.
Forever.
No chance for amendment.
Once done, realised,
existence is
abutted by abiding or subsisting pangs -
either fused with aches of foolishness
or sealed with the grace of Sophia.
A wish.
To peruse the tapestry
and view threads of gold
in the parts I have caused to be.
— judyanne, Mar 13, 2010
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pamela
16 years 2 months ago
the spirit
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you so much Pamela. i
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
sorry eph - that was a typo
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
The oneness of life
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you my annanya
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
love and hugs right back at you
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
I think i have to agree with
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks DD
Harvey
16 years 2 months ago
Great Meaning!
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you harvey
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you cat