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Akasha






 

Droplets in living waters

stretching to eternity.

Opposite, the same, synchronous

intricately and intractably intertwined.

 

Each whole a portion of undivided entirety

 

winking in and out,

quickly, ineffably,

unable to keep fast a single moment.

 

Thoughts and deeds,

even while being  processed

and consummated,

have elapsed. Become past

 

back over there.

Frozen. Intact.

Forever.

 

No chance for amendment.

Once done, realised,

existence is

abutted by abiding or subsisting pangs -

 

either fused with aches of foolishness

or sealed with the grace of Sophia.

 

A wish.

To peruse the tapestry

and view threads of gold

in the parts I have caused to be.

 

— judyanne, Mar 13, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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pamela

16 years 2 months ago

the spirit

Dear J., Your spirit is bright. I love it. You captured the ebb and flow of the matter. P.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

sorry eph - that was a typo

i did mean 'inephably' how silly of me. now i'll just have to make us a nice cuppa tea. and we can sit and chat about this and that and the part of the tapestry made by you and me. luv judd xxx
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

The oneness of life

Ann of Norway The oneness of life its essences baffling our senses, its magic harmony passing through like water, its invisible, intangible wholeness we strive to express. Judyanne, your wide expanses of land have captured your sky and earth/sea as one here, glinting in golden lights. Very nice thought, worthy too of the Native Australian. Love to your view(s) Annanya.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Judd

I agree with everyone above but these lines Alike opposite the same. something is not sitting right with me will think on it and come back to this one tonight ... maybe a comma after alike ? love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe edit stuffed up ya pretties lol
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Harvey

16 years 2 months ago

Great Meaning!

I loved the way your first stanza seemed to perfectly describe a literal drop of water into a body of water.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

thank you harvey

thanks for visiting and for your supportive comment. appreciated lol judy
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Judy

I thought it was exquisitely beautiful, such wonderful descriptions! Always, Cat