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Alley Cat.

Alley Cat.In our back alley there prowls an old cat,

With its ears all ragged and torn.

For him, no place on a fire-side mat,

No love to keep him warm.


On moonlit nights you hear him call,

No melodious tones of delight.

He's probably mixed in some kind of brawl,

For this cat it loves to fight.


As I lay awake in my bed at night,

When sleep comes not to my eyes.

Do I have pity for its plight,

As I listen to its nocturnal cries.


Once it was loved by human kind,

A fluffy little bundle of joy.

But alas it grew, independent of mind,

And was not deceived by man's ploy.


I saw him last with feline mate,

His eyes looked proudly into mine.

He dared me somehow to share his fate,

Inferring that a cats life, it is fine.


But I am soft, I like my ease,

Independence is hard to achieve.

A book by the fire, I'm easy to please,

At least that's what I believe.


So if you see him prowling by night,

Remember it was his own choice.

Try not to disturb his cat-like delight,

With your loud human voice.

© Bernard Shaw

— Bernard Shaw, Mar 13, 2010

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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Alley Cat.

Thank you for your comment. This poem came to me after listening to some cats, I presume they were courting. The noise they made did not disturb me it made me reach for pen and paper and this poem sis what came out. Greetings from bern.
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Alley Cat.

How right you are Annie, Cats like most of their kin Lions, tigers are all of the hunting families It is a small miracle that they have anything to do with we humans. Thank you for your Peace within. Bern
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I’ve heard the calls of

I've heard the calls of cats so many times thoughout my life, and yes a lot of it is mating. However, having owned several cats, they have many different sounds and I'm sure you heard that, and that's what inspired you to write such a lovely poem about them, without realising that you were really listening to them. Beautiful intellegent creatures they are, large, small, tame, wild, they merit admiration. Well perceived Bern...5 stars and a nominate. Rosina xena465
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Rosina.

Rosina, My lovely wife and I were asked to look after a small kitten the Mother cat had six kittens and the owners wanted to have the kittens put down. We immedietly said we would have one and help find homes for the others. which we eventually managed. We called our Kitten Minky she was a guest in our home for eighteen and a half years. We never regretted it. Minky was a companion, a clown, and one of the best pets we have ever been priveledged to live with. Thank you for your comment love from bern.
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xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I understand completely.

I understand completely. You must've been devistated when you lost her. The cat that has never left my thoughts, she's with me all the time like a little shadow following me through life without her body, but with her spirit, was called Cuddles. She was 16 when I had to put her to sleep, a terrible decision, but she would've died in pain if I'd kept her alive, and had only days to live. I got her as a stray when she was 1 year old. She had the most beautiful nature and everybody loved her, even people who didn't like cats let her sit on their knee. Rosina xena465
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Harvey

16 years 2 months ago

Gotta Love It!

Yor "Ode to an Alley Cat" is purrrfect! Cat's are such independent beings you really have to respect them and respect the way they take what life dishes out and makes it work. I've known several people who hate cats -- I've never heard a rational reason from any of them for that hatred.
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Harvey.

Thank you harvey for your comment on my litle poem Alley Cat. I have been priveledged to be host to both cats and dogs. Dogs are very faithful but a cat never looses its independance. If one stays with you at your home it is happy and satisfied with its food otherwise it will run off. Thanks again Harvey Have a great week-end bern.
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Harvey

16 years 2 months ago

Re: Bern's Fairy Tales

Noticing your graphic I thought you might enjoy a silly little fairy tale I wrote -- it's on my blog and called "The New Wishing Fairy"; here's the URL: http://versifications.blogspot.com/2010/02/new-wishing-fairie.html
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Wishing well by Harvey.

Harvey nice imagination, Yes you are right the girls would not fall into a well not even a wishing well. I could not comment as I have no google account Bern
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Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

I was just watching a

I was just watching a segment on cats this morning. Nora the piano-playing cat was the object of research. Very interesting. It appears that the *mom* is a piano teacher, the letters C&D the cat plays most resemble the sound of her mom (without the high pitch *mommy talk*) and the vibration corresponds to her purring (which she only does at the piano). Doctors are using vibrational sounds for healing, of course in Eastern medical arts for a long time. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZ860P4iTaM "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery
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Miss Webb

16 years 2 months ago

I love it

I really like this poem. Well Done
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Miss Web.

Thank You Miss Webb, Now I am curious is Miss Webb your real name or is it a synonym for the www, If it is you too have a great imagination. Best wishes from Bern.
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Alley Cat.

Cats are very sensitive to all that moves and are alert for the slightest sound. My cat Minky loved to sit on top of the television and try to catch the tennis ball when a tennis match was being shown. In the Far East Doctors use many sources to heal and I am not surprised to hear that the purring of a cat could be very resting for a patient. Thanky for commenting Bern.