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an internalized dialogue with nothing to say

i love how your tongue
wraps around my mind,
even so

my solipsistic tendencies
are merciless fabrications
mere insightful transgressions,
 
I must wage
an honourable duel
you are Picasso and I Dali, adrift in a dead sea
we are lonely travelers, sea gulls crying with
reluctant faces,
break waves and heresies

like windmills turning against diminishing horizons
like sunflowers absorbing a primal yellow,

stare across a universe
drift away with grey scratches

tumbleweeds
joined in holy wedlock, ghost towns
where only the cactus is wild with blooms,

even cell phones die in ivory towers; 
we breed poetry
like outlaws in America,
high society is but a begging bowl,
alms without arms

arcs of light, white Yang moving up
blends into the dark, black Yin moving down

the river is a stone and the stone is a cloud
I want to fuck you tonight,

I love how your tongue wraps
around my mind

even so.

even so.

— Kailashana, Mar 13, 2010

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Will Wright

16 years 2 months ago

Jeremiah Reflects

In the mountains I live With bear And beaver Cold is the nature of winter And I shiver in the snow Sometimes I adopted a woman once Shaved clean my face She was gentle, Made flapjacks from acorns We shared our bodies in a cabin of logs Made with my own hands I burned it down, too She, a victim of fate; I wrapped her and placed her With the boy in a bed. The flames carried them to heaven. I rode away into nothing. If you see me huddled Against the long chill Tell them I miss her And miss her soft flesh “Let someone else pass in the night” I miss her soft lips And her hand at my hearth
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

love it anna

but boy did that fuck line shock me out of my solipsism. love judd xxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Mum

such passion it burns the page ... the words ache through fire Love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

licked by tides and deepened in colour by volcanic eruptions...

Ann of Norway "like windmills turning against diminishing horizons like sunflowers absorbing a primal yellow," There is a stone on the beach of your mind, on it is writing and you are the one who FOUND IT and wrote this poem Anna; in which there are precious stones embedded in its imagery, polished by the hands of time, licked by tides and deepened in colour by volcanic eruptions..... "tumbleweeds joined in holy wedlock, ghost towns where only the cactus is wild with blooms," This was the equivalent of the F word wasn't it? In fact there are several places where you have said things equivalent I feel like the "absorbing a primal yellow" ..!!! You didn't need it in this most subtle of poems I think! Just me too!! Love from your sister Ann.
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Tremendous

What else have I missed. I think this is wonderful. I feel your whole being in this. Even so, even so. And yes, passionate. Love to you and yours. Lyz. XX