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elements

you are far,
as a lost letter
there is silence
where the elements join
the earth and sea
stretch over me
wear me  thin as air
a garment
thin as a fish birds neck
the hunter
swallowing a beggar
a dinner of vagrant tomorrow's
thin like a worn stone
skipped on water
I sink in seas
I am no navigator

until your voice
the rain had become fatherless
and the muddied boot
the foots orphan

when you spoke
the fruit tree budded
with bowls of clouds
succulents sweet with sun
the belled jewels of your heart
and the grass Shepard's of your feet
remembered me in the dark
at the edge of the oak wood
in the lost hour
poured together
the sky is thick with us
we are heard in the call of a wild loon

 

 

— Orphani, Mar 12, 2010

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Orphani

16 years 2 months ago

As always I thank you for

As always I thank you for your warm comments. You are so giving of your time and efforts here on Neo. I hope Anna dosen't mind if I say I adore you. B
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

HOW COULD I NOT

I perhaps did comment On this wonderful poem Alas I don’t see my script, Perhaps someone erased it. Twas one of its own kind Perhaps someone did mind, A non poet how dares that one Comment on you Like an aura the only one Whose words of love praise And freedom do amaze, All and everyone And as I stand In the witness box, As a poet I sure am no one. LOVED
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

It is nice to see you back

It is nice to see you back with your great poems. Lovely and well written with words that take me through the flow with ease. Wonderful. Rosina xena465
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Oh dear heart

Wish I had the same affect, lol. This is as above have said. Perfection, but I am biased. I love your poetry. Lol. No, I really enjoyed reading and it was a pleasure. I will try down the track to catch up, so many I have missed and it is a shame. I am looking forward to reading more, Barry. Missed your words of beauty. Love Lyz. XX
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful Barry Some

Beautiful Barry Some favourite lines here the hunter swallowing a beggar a dinner of vagrant tomorrow’s Seabhac