Diffidence

This is indeed an excellent poem and how your work has grown. The cathartic nature of what we write. Best Wishes Rosina Seabhac

I am not surprised by your write I've always believed you had it in you to write whatever you put your mind to ... your only barriers are the ones your own mind holds your only just beginning to spread your wings in word now fly darlin love Jayne-Chloe

you look beautiful and write magnificent thoughts in your new clothes. lahasax judy xxxx

this piece is very deep as it stretches the mind seeking self understanding. A very good exercise in self-awareness. I liked it very much. Always, Cat

I can just imagine it you capturing this sublime feeling . The Seeker Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow . Albert Einstein

Dear X., Very deep waters. must read more than once to get the fullness of it. P.

This one is so very very professional! A real feel-good message as well. 5 and a spot. Cheers, John.

This is mind power at work and very good Xena. When I first started writing so much came to the surface and still does, and poetry is a story of your life and lives of others, so go for it get out of the comfort zone, try something totally different and experiment. That's what its all about and a good one at this one my lovely friend. Cheers, Love Mona xoxoxoxo

I perhaps did comment On this wonderful poem Alas I don’t see my script, Perhaps someone erased it. Twas one of its own kind Perhaps someone did mind, A non poet how dares that one Comment on you Like an aura the only one Whose words of love praise And freedom do amaze, All and everyone And as I stand In the witness box, As a poet I sure am no one.

Very Nice Rosina, I love the new you **Smiles** Bravo girl!! Keep it up :-) two thumbs up!! Hugs, Venus xxx

That is a poem all it itself those words and if only we could all be in that mode of embracing each other what a world it would be. Good write Rosalina and keep up the writing, soon the sun will peek out at you and the dark shadows shall ease away in the winds. Love Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

In life not to say my life had been a bed of roses friend. I have always with the grace of God gotten back up off my feet with all that has transpired in my life and known that this too shall pass has always encouraged and helped me along the way. As we know all people have different ways to deal with things I have never been turned down in a healing sense of the Word and have always made it a brighter day in spite of adversities. The mind can play havoc on a weak body for sure and when mind and body are not in sync with each other it does tend to affect your physical and emotional being. Not all things work for certain people and I am not preaching doctorate to anyone as I only can say kep the faith friend and know that you are not alone in your feelings as many, mnay others share this also. It may be a part of life but a part we can grow and heal from and know that others care. Find something you love to do, inspires you like your writings and make it shine, for only you and no magic pill can heal you from body and soul. I think the writing is a very good therapeutic way of expressing alot of feelings whether they are of bad weather or good so I encourage you dearest of friends to look up and beyond what ever you can and remember the poem The serentiy prayer, the one that changed many peoples outlook. You can only change from within and whatever you can not change learn to live with it or it will consume you. The courage to change the things you can and the knowledge to let the rest just go. Like the sparrow flies so shall some darkened days of worry and pains. I love you my friend thats all I can say here. I know you have a heart of gold and a mind of an angel, let it shine, let it shine and remember this too shall pass. Help yourself and in so you will be a beacon of hope for many others. Much love to you my Rosalina xoxooxox

Yes friend and a friend is one who also understands without the critizing of just how we live our lives or think of it. This is a true friend, one in whom you can talk and share with without all the judgementals that go along with some of it. We therefore can not judge others as they judge us. It is what we are that makes all of us unique in our own special way, some may not think of such, but know we can not live our lives for others we can only be who we are and help those that ask for it and shall recieve it. We are only we, the best we can be. Have a nice weekend dear friend. Love You, Mona xoxoxoxo P S when you get time stop over for coffee or tea and cookies too.:)

u steel so many hearts please do add another one mine if it can find a place in the non poets please do not displace loved

and all the above comments vindicate me, that's why I waited to comment, to let you see for yourself how joyed your readers would be by growth and risk-taking. Could use some editing, a bit wordy in places. I prefer the last draft of the first verse I read, more pithy, you don't have to spell evertyhing out for your reader, they tend to be pretty smart. Still question the word choice of "cells", understand it but doesn't fit well with the metaphor. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

altogether a tighter, more professional write, without losing any of the drama and passion. Well done! Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Two words: Well done! Big smiles, ~A How does it feel? Like a rolling stone... Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar

More of this please! What a great line...captures your theme of frustration and drive...it's all been said above. Ells x

Hey, I am not an expert on these things but that to me sounded very good.