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Mar 11, 2010
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Positive forces
A force that wraps you in warmth
Securing, leaves nothing to harm
Vague, masked, unseen.
You’re lost in darkness
Light he will provide
By your side, unmasked.
A scratch on your cheek
His fury unleashed
Intents kill with a glance.
Lost in your deepest thought
He provides clarity
Bringing fourth your final verdict.
At loss for positivity
He’ll make you smile
Take you in his arms.
Your desires unseen
He completes them
Show you his heart.
The wall you’ve built
He’s climbed over it
Lowered the bridge.
Feelings you’ve never felt
He gives you unsparingly
Never to leave you in the cold.
You made him promise
He’d keep this forever
To lose would be the end.
To have, and hold forever
— sunscreen, Mar 11, 2010
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Alice Ember
16 years 3 months ago
Nice
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you :) It kinda just
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Actually most people get it
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
one more time
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
I still nominate you loose juice or no lose
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Hahaha
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
A lovely poem from the heart
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Alex
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Jayne, hows your
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Alex congrates on evolution
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Well then, I will wait for
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
Dear S., This a
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you very much :) I’m
Bonitaj
16 years 2 months ago
WELL DONE KIDDO!
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you very much. :) Yes