loved

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Is there life after death

There is no life after death

Have you ever seen a dead rat?

Come alive again?

There is no transformation of souls either

There are more births than deaths

Did you not know that as yet?

So give credit to the Human mind

Each soul has to a new garb find

And then we continue

To ourselves remind

God has been so very kind.

Yes he has been

If he had known better

Life and death

Would have equalled in measure

But alas we have to alone face disaster

In Haiti and Chile so many died

We all cried

Yet they alone

Have to look after

That’s what Gods message is

For you

Help your self and start life

Afresh anew,

Will you?

— loved, Mar 11, 2010

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Critiques

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

I share

Loved, hello.. I like your poem title and your smooth pen. I agree with the logic of your philosophy. We own our decisions and action or no action and what hapens as a result :) Mark FlexAbilities

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

ur so kind to give ur free and frank views which i cherish most rgds loved

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

I did not like the poem, it

I did not like the poem, it was poor, could use some work. If you choose to write about your beliefs, try to be less vague. Good day to you. :)

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

Quite a contrast here

If you really belive it vague so be it. I saw it as spot on truth. Regards, Mark FlexAbilities

loved

16 years 2 months ago

i love ur true assessment as i am no poet ur giving me a single star instaed of poor rating is an added honour i am no poet only a scientist loved rgds but a very positive and kind person short of being a padry or preacher of love faith kindness and faith each one for himself

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

my regards notwitstanding i like ur frankness loved

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

hi lovedthere’s some good

hi loved there's some good stuff here, but you seem to contradict yourself, first saying there's no life after death and then seeming to talk about souls and re-incarnation. it starts off well. don't be disheartenend i will visit again. lol judy

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

i shall review rgds loved

R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 2 months ago

i could understand the tone

i could understand the tone of you through this poem. i felt. shan

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thank you

thank u i consider myself being honoured by ur even reading my poem and also taking time to comment on it rgds and thanks again loved

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I give you five stars for

I give you five stars for being frank about your feelings. The fact that you did contradict a little, just goes to show how belief and non-belief can become confusing in our thoughts...nice one Loved. Rosina xena465

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks a great deal u flatter me beyond my level of recognition loved