Cheating Death (Inspired by the new novel I'm writing)

So is this yours or Paul's poem? "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery

Dear R, I'm guessing that you guys are writing this book together? I told your partner that I liked the poem and the idea. I look forward to the book.

nice write rett a very interesting piece =)~Lillie Thrasher

Us immortals wallow in the degenerate glory of eternal exctasy and anguish. Good poem though. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Humans are mere curiosities. curiouser and curiouser.. Love your stuff and sometimes strange stuffh happens, eh, Rett? ~A "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery

This poem reminded me of the intro song for a t.v. program of long ago titled: "Paladin" do you remember it? I found this piece to be highly enjoyable. It is so nice to see you again. I hope all is well with you? Always, Cat

Nice write!

This follows your character well, are you writing No# 2? It is a great story, sad to outlive everything you love, but what a twist ehh. Richard

Shades of Lazarus Long meets Cain! Go for it, my friend, it'll make an intriguing novel. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

u r a great poet cum author gr888888888888 even i am a pseudo poet you may like to gloss over some of my poems too thanks it will be a distinguished honour to receive a comment from a great poet a non poet that i am thanks and rgds good wishes for your next novel too

Paw it's great. I had issue with one unsure line, your never unsure whats up with that? "if he still remains sane" maybe just as a thought should be along the lines of "missing the beat of lifes rhyme" and I think "how you cope with loneliness" should be "coping with loneliness" in my humble opinion. Now you know I know the truth here, but the unsurity translated. So until everyone has read the novel seems a touch weak. In my opinion. I found no fault in your flow anywhere else and I loved it. Reminds me I have lots of reading to do. And I am now excited for it, that should help. busy busy busy. But I am so glad that you, Mr Busy himself, found time and felt well enough to post. I was missing your ryhmes something fierce. Love ya bunchs, xoxoxoxo Julie D.D.