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Millage
Mar 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My snowflake girl

My snowflake girl
Your beauty makes me cry
I ache for you
And long for my tears to dry

My snowflake girl
How can you be so fragile
Your porcelain looks
And innocence of a child

My snowflake girl
Will you ever be mine
My blackened heart
So longing all the time

My snowflake girl
There's nothing more I can do
Have I made a mistake
By opening up to you

My snowflake girl
Your eyes so sapphire blue
No more words from me
Could win your heart from you

My snowflake girl
I told you how I felt
I now can do no more
So take me before you melt.
— Millage, Mar 11, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! Is

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! Is this a song? I can hear a melody. Hugs, Anna Typo in line 1, stanza 3. "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery
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Millage

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you once again...

You are far too kind. Typo duly amended hun. It is not a song, but a local band over here are talking about me writing for them. Which is rather flattering! Much love Millage x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

If its not a song it should

If its not a song it should be ... bravo Mile man ... thought I would visit before bed see what you wrote ... she must be a beauty to inspire such as this ;) love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes a beauty of a song

And A beauty of a write my Millag One tweak should it say Have I made a mistake opening up to you? Check it out again. Magnifico Love Mona xxoxoox
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Millage

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Mona

I appreciate your comments and will amend the typo straight away. You are far too kind. :-D Much love Millage x
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Hey mate

My heart melts for you and your snowflake girl. I love how you have written, worded and title. Agree with all above and I will get back to you as soon as I can. Love to you and yours, yes, and the cat, lol. Lyz. XX
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Millage

16 years 2 months ago

I am so chuffed....

You took time out to read it. Hun. I so hope you are well. And thankyou once again. Much love Millage x
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

I am chuffed

You are an entertainer and I hope all is well, not heard from u in a while. Love and wishes to all. Lyz. XX