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CS

club special

Mar 10, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tide

A heart is shaped
By remote shores

The lion keeps
Its distant roar

A solemn vow
Chased into view

As shadows walk
Between and through

— club special, Mar 10, 2010

About This Poem

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Country/Region: Colorado

Favorite Poets: William Blake, Poe, Yeats, Crowley

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Critiques

DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

I liked it. Simple sweet

I liked it. Simple sweet sincere poetry. Julie D.D.

TS

The Seeker

16 years 3 months ago

Great piece of art

Great piece of art I like it . gifts of life are simple things given from the heart. Friendly yourr..The Seeker

CS

16 years 2 months ago

Tide

Thanks for your compliment, not to many folks appreciate poetry in my social circle... Brian

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Club Special

Welcome to neopoet ... I look forward to reading a little more from you ... this is a wonderful poem ... but also a tease I wanted MORE lol kind regards Jayne-Chloe

CS

16 years 2 months ago

Tide

Thanx for your too kind input. I will be posting every Wednesday night. It's only the tip of the iceburg. Brian

R

raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Meditative, nice rhythm. I

Meditative, nice rhythm. I like the images used and how you wrapped up the ending. Raskin

CS

16 years 2 months ago

Tide

Seems like you broke down that poem and gave me a fresh look at it . Thanks Brian