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The Gospel Affect

My heart is pounding violently
against my chest
as I take each step
really fast...

running away from myself.

I fall to the ground
the asphalt digs deep
and my hands bleed
turning my head...

looking back, I am still there.

Embraced by fear
the hairs on my neck rise
as I gaze into myself
I can see the devil in those eyes...

unable to break free.

So once and for all
I answered the call of grace
praying for humility
then everything changed...

and I love the new me.
— DarkinAZ, Mar 10, 2010

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Seren

16 years 3 months ago

The evolution in loving self

The evolution in loving self ... i related to this one ...well done I agree with Jess your poetry has changed wonderfully done love and hugs Jayne-Chloe
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raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Grace is good. Nice

Grace is good. Nice expression, heartfelt. Raskin
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Lovely

You know I can always come to your poem and never feel or see a negative comment about it so I know I am reading something very good all the time I visit your pages. Bravo my friend Love, Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Where are you Mark

Stopping by to say hi and where is your next write, Patiently waiting and have a great weekend Love Mona xooxox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.