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Life's A Mirage

LIFE'S A MIRAGE

 

As I move around

In a solitary confinement

Life’s desire seems to confront me.

I move towards a newer destination

Success still seems to elude me.

 

Moving on in the desert of life

I visualise hopes of many oases

But as I move much closer

Towards these springs of water

The mirage of life moves farther.

 

What is life but an illusion?

Each one views it

In ones own inimitable way.

What’s the imaginary vision?

That comes up by ones’ path way?

 

I see the distant horizon

And in gleeful imagination

As I move closer

The hallucination moves further.

 

Life’s a total unsolved mystery

What this optical illusion is to a desert,

That’s a real hope for me.

This vision in my life

Is an oasis of salvation?

I have still to cope

With many a vast horizon

 

No matter how further

The illusion moves away

I shall capture it some day.

— loved, Mar 10, 2010

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

And yes you will

I liked this alot. There was a spelling word oasis in the beginning, this one is nice it flows well and I love your new picture. Success is always at your fingertips, just work at it and be happy as much as you can. Life is not always a bed of roses but we can make it that way if only we do. Keep up your writing experiment in other types of writing if you will, expand your horizons. You will find your happiness and you will succeed in whatever you put your mind to. Peace to you my friend Love, Magics02
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks ma'am

MY SALAAAAMS UR GREAT INDED THANKS AND RGDS AS YOU READ AND COMMENT FOR ME LOVED
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS

I JUST WRITE GET COMMENTS AND THEN ASK MY COMPY TO HELP WRITE GOOD ONES AGAIN THANKS RGDS LOVE
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Loved

fear not dear loved your not forsaken my attention wanders and is sometimes taken lol thought you wrote me some verse felt you deserved some back I see your improving your poetry and striving for change ... well done love and hugs Jayne-Chloe