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Terry 2





 

I’ve lost the sun that lit my nights when all else are fast asleep.

A confidante, co-conspirator to help my secrets keep.

I’ve lost someone to share a joke in late night girlie bouts.

But mostly I‘ve lost a loyal mate who blew away my self-doubts.

 

When I too make that journey Home be waiting at Time’s door.

We will catch up on our friendship, then and evermore.

And in the eternal now of love our dreams we’ll realise

in the myriads of colours, scents and songs seen through our spirit eyes.

 

While we clothe ourselves in gowns of clouds, with rainbows round our heads

we’ll paint our lives with comet tails, as my friend Rudyard said;

visit stars and moons and suns and see that nothing’s dead

and catch up on the gossip, on the things we’ve left unsaid.

 

We’ll listen to the choir of gentle voices long moved on

and to the sound of spinning worlds and fires and  things thought long gone.

We‘ll smell the raging dignity of the colourful world of being -

the music of God’s handiwork that will be for eternity.

 

We’ll swim in the Sea of Tranquillity, climb the Pillars of Creation,

visit the Seven Sisters and the Crab Nebula ‘s rotation.

We’ll slide down spiral galaxies, ride the round-a-bout Milky Way,

spinning ourselves quite silly in the colours of The Play.

 

When we’ve seen all of these we’ll visit other universes

and marvel at the diversity of God’s intents and purposes.

Wait at the door, be patient for me, for I’ll see you there at this end.

Oh the things we’ll do and see and hear when we meet again my friend.






— judyanne, Mar 10, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

He will be there waiting for you dear Judyanne

Ann of Norway I know it, I just know it, as here you grab the rainbow and ride its arc into the heavens of your mind and there you will find what you dream of and more at that door. But while you're here live your life well and take with you new memories to share! Love you Annanya.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

love you right back annanya

love you right back annanya - but he is a she. just thought i'd clear that - or late night girly bouts takes on a different context. terry was my best friend. she died last christmas. judyanne
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Milles perdones-désolée

Ann of Norway So sorry not to be more 'oppmerksom' and notice that it was your dear fried from before, sometimes a poem will start itself off as we read and carry our minds only along its melodies and thoughts and not be read in context, please forgive this error, not intentional at all. Love to you from all your past feelings of love, on the mists of the Norwegian sunrise beams now enveloping the landscape and rending the view void, they sway over the sea to you in the solar winds of love, annanya.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

perfectly okay annanya

i only pointed it out because of the 'girly' thing. xxxx love to you, will catch up soon, i'm caught up at the moment with business concerning my book. hugs and love judyanne xxxx
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pamela

16 years 3 months ago

teardrops

D. J., It made me cry. Sometimes death seems like the only constant. Beautiful.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

hey bud!!

so kind of you crud but if your gonna raise a glass be sure it's got class terry sure didn't drink the crap stuff, luv judd
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Judd

(((((((((hugs))))))))) your write left me speechless love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x x Btw your emails on its way tonight just double checked and its working again ... will get all three of the emails I sent you on their way when all is quiet
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

thanks jaycee

another confidence booster from you. appreciated love judd xxxxxxx
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is your best by far. I

This is your best by far. I was totally engrossed all the way through, and felt the journey like I was on a spacecraft seeing everything from a close-up eye-view. Beautiful Judy ***************************** Rosina xena465