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Blank Chat...

Blank...stopped by, wanting to chat
Killer was pissed, wanted none of that
What gall, how dare he, interrupt my space
Killer throws daggers at his smiley-face

Killer watched this one, with some care
He was thinking, that they wouldn't dare
Flim-flammed and worded, just so right
Showing off for the crowd, on Saturday night

Trying to boggle Killer's mind
Using skills of a different kind
Pushing aside snide suggestion
Killer got thoughts, for digestion

To deaf ears, Blank quested his query
Said this is boring, he left in a hurry
Before Killer could slay his sorry ass
He left like he came, quick, with no class

Fast to anger, a little slow to react
Killer saw through the sneak attack
I should'a ripped off, the offending finger
I would'a done it too, had he lingered

Now Killer is stoked, he wants to see
Blank's guts hanging from the old oak tree
I'll break his legs, and then his arms
Use his eyes for lucky charms

I'll stomp that guy, and eat his lips
Bake his skin into crisp, thin chips
I'll crack his nuts, though they're wee
Say, this is what you get; Don't fuck with me

— Geezer, Mar 10, 2010

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

OH GEE ….. holy shit who

OH GEE ..... holy shit who pissed you off darlin .... seriously there is venom dripping from this one ... bloody good write my new yawk mate smiles for miles Jayne-Chloe with love and hugs x x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Oh Gee...

Did it show? Yeah, had someone show up on my chat this past Sat. nite, and ask if there was anyone who wanted to leave and chat with him/her. I don't remember the name, and don't really want to know. I could look it up, but rather that they remain as faceless as they were before. I haven't been keeping up with Neo. very well lately. Lots of stuff going on. But, I will do my best to catch up with everyone. Thanks for the read, I'm glad that the venom showed through, maybe they won't be so crass again. Higgest bugs, ~ Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

The venom dripped from the

The venom dripped from the page lovely lol I knew straight off someone had pissed you off ... when you write emotively it shines love and higgliest bugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Pissed off poet...

I suppose that I could have chosen a better title, but was anxious to post, and couldn't think of anything better. I wasn't shooting blanks, and was trying to be very pointed. It was a crass, shitty thing to do. Thanks for the read, ~ Gee
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Killer was...

not really expecting to be needed, and was just lounging around. By the time he got properly woke up, the intruder was gone. Killer needs his memory refreshed on meeting Alex. Thanks again for everything, ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

very nice

DeMona is applauding. She knows what it is like to have someone come in and ruin a perfectly good chat. She is also wondering if Killer got his letter......very good write...well done....
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Very nice...

Thank you and DeMona. Yes, Killer did get his letter. He would like to have a date again soon. He has missed her greatly. ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

DeMona is

looking forward to another date with Killer....it's been a while since she killed anything....she has missed him equally as much
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Gee and Killer

Grand. Yes, venomous, but hey, its Killer. I very much enjoyed your bitch and I am looking forward to seeing what else you have been up to. Love and well done. Lyz. XX
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 2 months ago

Gee and Killer...

Not a whole lot, but expect to be doing more now. So glad Killer could bring you some enjoyment. Thank you for the read and compliments. ~ Gee