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Mar 09, 2010
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so beautiful
so beautiful the night cries
shooting stars,
these are breathless minutes
I bear mere moments
of Ecstasy, for a thousand
hours in torment
forever forgives the bane
of man, but eternity remembers
I embrace each stroke of love
abhor the slight of hate,
life was ever so beautiful
my night cried,
I seep into the sands of time
in a shimmer of satin tears
I release a star to love
— Seren, Mar 09, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
now you got me sighing love
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
what can I say?
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
So beautiful....
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
Intimacy is so many things,
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Of the night, only the star
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
I question it every night I
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
So Beautiful...
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket"
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
I just want you all to know
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
That’s a very nice thing
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
I would be a shitty poet
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 3 months ago
i sleep into …..satin
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Shan
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Just a deep sigh
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Seabhac
Lenny of Cohen
16 years 2 months ago
Adorable
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Lenny