River Race

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in leafy shadows

the rambling river flows wide

pebbles race in place

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— crypticbard, Mar 09, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows., I am because we are

Critiques

raskin

16 years 3 months ago

First time I read this I

First time I read this I thought isn't that nice. I've read it a few times now and like it more each time. In so few words brings to my mind wonderful, lazy images of a summer day. Times I've spent canoeing on a lazy river, watching the flow. raskin

Frederick Kesner

16 years 3 months ago

Wow

I am humbled by your honest expression, no apologies, no railings and rantings, just an open faced sharing of your journey with the poem. Cheers.

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

A truly lovely poem… If

A truly lovely poem... If you want to make a Haiku 5-7-5, add ing to flow... ~A "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery

Frederick Kesner

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks

for your kind words of comment.