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FEATHERS

FEATHERS 

Some small feathers leave the nest

and fly to other climes,

away from warmth of home

and roam on other beaches 

finding stones and weeds and sand

to cling to as they go,

each whim of breeze caressing,

tearing them loose, 

free,

and yet still bound by gravity.

 

This feather once was bright

in colours rich and bold, 

it danced in summer's breath,

in autumn with the leaves, impressed,

in winter cold and stiff, it froze,

and in the spring all life around,

it rose born up by one pale innocent rose,

it tried to bloom again

but winter's fingers had exposed it 

to the rot and mould,

its colours now no longer bold

but faded grey, its day now done, 

its life once youth begun,

now old.

 

It lay among the junk of life's gathered tears

and there decayed for ever grey

among the broken stones and clay.  

 


— Nordic cloud, Mar 08, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Oh Ann …. I am speechless

Oh Ann .... I am speechless bravo darling its all I can muster I am so sorry your write just floored me love you Jayne-Chloe x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

You’ve turned a new page,

You've turned a new page, Ann. I'm not sure I like it, however the poetry is astounding. Your sister, Anna "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

XXXXXX

I love you annanya. judyanne xxxx
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Lovely Ann…just so

Lovely Ann...just so lovely...poor little feathers. Rosina xena465
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pamela

16 years 3 months ago

perfection

D. Ann, Absolutely perfection. I loved everything about it especially the imagery. P.
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Ann

From heart and soul. You touch mine. Love Lyz. XX