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FEATHERS
Some small feathers leave the nest
and fly to other climes,
away from warmth of home
and roam on other beaches
finding stones and weeds and sand
to cling to as they go,
each whim of breeze caressing,
tearing them loose,
free,
and yet still bound by gravity.
This feather once was bright
in colours rich and bold,
it danced in summer's breath,
in autumn with the leaves, impressed,
in winter cold and stiff, it froze,
and in the spring all life around,
it rose born up by one pale innocent rose,
it tried to bloom again
but winter's fingers had exposed it
to the rot and mould,
its colours now no longer bold
but faded grey, its day now done,
its life once youth begun,
now old.
It lay among the junk of life's gathered tears
and there decayed for ever grey
among the broken stones and clay.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Oh Ann …. I am speechless
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
You’ve turned a new page,
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
XXXXXX
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
I loved this piece very much so
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
It strange to see how the
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Lovely Ann…just so
pamela
16 years 3 months ago
perfection
lyz
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann