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Mar 08, 2010
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a wild thing of creation,caged
The fig tree
was our rotunda,
the roots valleys
leading to our kingdom
not fifty feet away
a concrete range
bridged worlds,
and stood silently, sullen
our very own
mountain of doom
fearsome as knights and maids
we traversed cement battlements
I crossed on the Styx,
the other world moved
like a slithering mass of parasites
ever closing in on our seat of power
shimmers of time shivered the river,
as the monster of madness
split the surface
an almighty bellow,
'get the fuck home
for dinner'
my brother,
a Caesar ruled
and was slaughtered
by his own,
me caged and fed
like a wild thing
by mine
— Seren, Mar 08, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Jesus H. Christ, Jayne.
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Lmao this was a funny write
CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
wild thing is putting it
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
What you talking bout lol I
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Wild thing, I think I love
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Wild thing ….do do do do
pamela
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Seren, I love
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Pamela … glad you
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
so many memories i lived while reading yours my friend.
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judd
Will Wright
16 years 3 months ago
childhood, remembered
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
You read it perfectly Will