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Like an Overdose

In seconds
You enchant me,
Like an overdose,
In a single sighting.

With each second,
Our friendship grows.
With every moment,
Your faults, they go.

You distort my sight,
change my perspective.
You push me,
You make me live.
— evie.haywood, Mar 07, 2010

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poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

Evie

I do like your style of writing and once again MORE lol I would like to see you write something a bit longer as to the content of the poem , isn't that always the way? Chrys