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Xena (Warrior Princess)

On a quiet mountain of ancient Greece,

her witch-hazel hair blows in the breeze.

A body of armour worn like a glove,

leather caps protect her knees.

 

In the time of mythical legends,

Xena looks upon her latest conquest.

The village burns in fiery rain,

a warrior exhales a sigh of burlesque.

 

Her army of outlaws dance in the rain.

They raid treasures of the destitute.

Sparse possessions cherished, robbed.

Evil plays music from the flute.

 

Callisto lies, barely breathing;

trapped, she lay by friends and kin.

Unable to move; swearing revenge,

fury is born from deep within.

 

Xena, Callisto’s greatest enemy;

still plunders and slays the innocent.

Until she’s banished to a land,

in purgatory; she’s dealt her punishment.

 

Xena converts to become a protector,

lessons learned, in the valley of death.

She travels far to protect the innocent.

Xena’s new quest is to rid evil from earth.

 

Callisto and many of Xena’s enemies,

still hunt to seek revenge of old.

Something’s can’t be forsaken.

There’s carnage waiting to unfold.

— xena465, Mar 07, 2010

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Ross Hamilton Hill

Ross Hamilton Hill

16 years 3 months ago

hi zena

Technically it's accomplished, the more you do the more you can do. I'm making you a honourary member of the Hamilton clan.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Ross. I’m a fan of

Thanks Ross. I'm a fan of Xena & Hercules and there's so much more to the legend. That's why the end is left dangling. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I love the fables of Xena &

I love the fables of Xena & Hercules, and I was trying to get so much into this poem, but it's impossible. I find my words through painstakingly searching various meanings and words via the thesaurus and choosing the right ones to fit the sentences...really hard work for me. I'm glad you thought I managed this okay. Thanks Troy. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Mine too Anna…my pen name

Mine too Anna...my pen name Xena was chosen from her name. My pet rat Xena's was named after her too. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Indi…it’s really

Thanks Indi...it's really me, xena465, that's the real warrior princess. Rosina xena465
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pamela

16 years 3 months ago

I love that time and those

I love that time and those legends of old. You really captured it. Great job! P.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks so much Pamela. I

Thanks so much Pamela. I still watch them when they're re-shown on TV. My sister and I was in love with Hercules. Rosina xena465
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

The old tales catch our imagination

Ann of Norway The old tales catch our imagination and here you too have done that Xena465 Dear Rosina, with love Ann. P.S. I wore breast plates not knee plates for fencing, "En garde"!!! So watch it!!
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Thanks Ann

I guess I wish I was the real Xena. Strong and able to fight off the baddies. xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Ta so much Ann…That’s

Ta so much Ann...That's me...Xena...The Warrior Princess...Still fighting the War of the Roses...well the Rosina's war anyway. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Sharon. I like to

Thanks Sharon. I like to try and write with different themes and I think this one fits the bill. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes Great Xena Warrior

I just love this one and I can feel the fire in your writing as your pen was bearing down on the paper, such a lovely vivid poem and heated up also. Good job my lady Love, Magics02 xoxoxoxoox
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Yes it is a summary, as to

Yes it is a summary, as to tell the whole story would take a book. I love the Xena, Hercules shows. Thanks Alex... give a wee cuddle to Ninja. I know she's a lovely cat. You only told me the naughty things she did. I could tell by her picture that she is well looked after and in beautiful condition...beautiful coat she has too. Rosina xena465
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

YES! She has the cutest

YES! She has the cutest weird color spot mark on her leg, I'll send ya a pic of it, and I do take very good care of her, though she sheds profusely, and gets it all over my clothes, I don't much mind. Anyways I wish they had shows like that still, nowadays they only have junk on the TV sex, money, drugs, and crime.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Got your pic of Ninja. I

Got your pic of Ninja. I can't see the spot on her leg. The photo is small on my screen I'll see if I can enlarge it. Alex. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I had a beautiful pure white

I had a beautiful pure white long-haired cat called Charlee, and guess what? My favorite colour is black. I had to wait until I was just going out the door before I could get dressed. Yes I know there's too much rubbish on TV these days. Rosina xena465
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

Ninja wiggles her behind

Ninja wiggles her behind when shes about to attack too, lol. and she took off down the street after a great Dane once, I was running so fast to grab her.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Yes I image that’s

Yes I image that's probably what happened to it. When they're only part wild like that they learn not to fear anything, even a pitbull. A pure feral cat would avoid every living thing unless threatened. I love it when a cat wriggles it's bum like that. It looks so cute. All my cats did that but only in play. Can you imagine Zak, my wee rat, wriggling his bum...NOW THAT WOULD LOOK FUNNY. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I’ve pictured it in my

I've pictured it in my mind and it makes me laugh and think about a cartoon of a rat. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Eph. I may write a

Thanks Eph. I may write a follow up soon when my mind can handle the many ventures this poem has to offer. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Eph. I may write a

Thanks Eph. I may write a follow up soon when my mind can handle the many ventures this poem has to offer. Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks a lot…congrats on

Thanks a lot...congrats on the SPOTLIGHT. Since I found out how to nominate I nomitated this one as it's well deserved...wish I'd known about it before. Have you read my new post? I'm not sure it will go down well because of the topic. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Awww dont think its me in

Awww dont think its me in spotlight I think Ann's there at the moment ... hun if there is anything your not sure about or how to get round Neopoet just send me a PM I am usually round for the first few hours of your day I will endeavor to help ... I havent read your latest but will go look now love Jayne-Chloe
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Jayne. I’m learning

Thanks Jayne. I'm learning slowly but surely and if I need more help I'll definitely take up your offer. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Want to know something ? i

Want to know something ? i was here a couple of months before I had the courage to start asking questions we all have to learn our way round and if you need help dont hesitate love JayCee
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

I'll save ya Huey

I'll just tell her what a great guy you are, and I Xena, the Warrior Princess, will protect her man from all the ladies of Neo. Rosina xena465