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Mar 06, 2010
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Don't Let Us Fade Away
Fog and temperary mist
Is intriguing while it's there
But the morning loses to the noon
Becoming unseen air
And I saw the sinking sun
Biggest star of the sunset show
Let's not be like that- over and done
Dear,never let us go
I saw among the rolling plains
Sunlit antelope and herds of buffalo
Though in a dream-so real they seemed
They were shot dead years ago
I bought you a dozen red roses
To mark our " one year today"
I love you, and all I know is
Dear, don't let us fade away
Is intriguing while it's there
But the morning loses to the noon
Becoming unseen air
And I saw the sinking sun
Biggest star of the sunset show
Let's not be like that- over and done
Dear,never let us go
I saw among the rolling plains
Sunlit antelope and herds of buffalo
Though in a dream-so real they seemed
They were shot dead years ago
I bought you a dozen red roses
To mark our " one year today"
I love you, and all I know is
Dear, don't let us fade away
— Jesse.D, Mar 06, 2010
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magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Just lovely
Kassie
16 years 2 months ago
awwwww!
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