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Mar 06, 2010
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Lying perfectly still the
rhythm of my beating chest
capturing echos, the silence
drifting inward without out
ward stimulation.
A frequent occupation sought
after without deliberation
creating patterns that have
never dwelt in flesh but felt.
Take this stoney heart smelting!
it in your forge transforming it
from choice rock to a fortress of
steel with a key shared between made
of brass for you and me built to last.
Alcamey in effect white burning flames
impurities cast out with cold steel hit
hard on hot altercations spitting from
the flames.
Then lifted from the ashes of previous
regret and dusted from its mould behold!
A fusion of belonging.
— ziggy, Mar 06, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 3 months ago
hi cat
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
breathtaking
ziggy
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hi
Seren
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Dear Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi jayne
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Spoken with an urgency
ziggy
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