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magics02

Mar 06, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

AMORE MY FRIEND

Amore my friend, it’s love once again
The moon has struck, clock strikes twice
Amore my love, I give you my hand
Our lovestruck is here, we share the night

This love always on time, never too late
We break bread together, we drink of fine wines
Sitting closely, our hearts feeling entwined
Clutching each other’s embrace, your’s and mine

Amore my friend, this love never to end
When moon is high, and wines are chilled
We snuggle together just round the bend
It’s our time together, for never to be stilled

The clock strikes, all love surpasses
All fears of darkness forgotten and away
Together, bread and wine of many glasses
Staring in your eyes, sights glimmer of moon’s haze

Amore my friend, it’s love once again
my love in holding your sweet caress
We sit here my soulmate, my everlasting friend
Moonstruck shines together, forever till the end..

— magics02, Mar 06, 2010

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16 years 3 months ago

Yes it is all in his eyes

Thank you Lovely as the moon struck madness and the shine of the starry eyes is what I love the most of this poem.....soft caresses and oh the moon bella luna for us. Thank you for visit and the stars to go along with the moon's whispered touch. ciao bella Mona xoxoxox

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16 years 3 months ago

Yes Mona L

Yes you would not believe the movie I am now watching, I will let you guess it. lol I was playing around in a zone far away from a long ago day and night. Knowing soon the moon, the wine, the dine, will be here soon. lol How have you been by the way? magics02 oxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

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16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Troy

I know I just had to use it there. I am glad you enjoyed this one, As I watched the Movie Moonstruck (it is always a favorite of mine) it brang back some nice memories of up home eith my culture. Thank you for the visit, and of course I do not mind and welcome all feedback, crits, whatever you want to call it. ciao bella magics02

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Atticus

16 years 3 months ago

It has a classic feel to it

It has a classic feel to it for me.....which I enjoy. Makes me want to spin a Dean Martin record and tip my hat. -Nathaniel

M

16 years 3 months ago

Yes that sounds fun

Thank you for the visit and yes make it sing that is a good idea. I have been researching doing lyrics for some well named singer. I really think we can push the envelope with our poetry if we have a strong conviction about it. I know I do and I know you do too. So go spin that Dean Martin Cd and tap away. Thanks again for the visit, and we will talk again soon. love,magics02 xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Sounds to me like you’re

Sounds to me like you're surely lovestruck...lucky you. Nice rhythm and flow magics. Rosina xena465

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16 years 3 months ago

LOL that was cute Xena

No lovestruck right now but this one I did for the future love when it strikes lol maybe it is in memory of one that was. I was just compelled to write it yesterday. The other nite the moon was so big and bright and I was reflecting on alot of things this being one of them. love to you Xena Magics xoxoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

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16 years 3 months ago

oh la la la Theo

lol Thanks you for the visit and the comment made me laugh. I was just in the mind of the moon and the wine and the dine yesterday. I was trying something out of my usual simple to the point poetry. I am glad you liked it and hope all is well with you and the family, Love, Magics02 xooxoxx

16 years 3 months ago

Ironic that I read this

Ironic that I read this today, as I had a very eventful night. Superb Ms. Mona. :) Just another one of your great writes

M

16 years 3 months ago

Sunblocker whats up?

Thank you again for visiting me. Yeah I was watching Moonstruck and this poem came to my heart and mind. I hope your night was brightened with moon's hazy light. Keep up your writing, I see a great improvement with your mentoring. Thank you again Love, Mona xxoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 3 months ago

Well I only saw the moon

Well I only saw the moon twice, when I walking to her house, and when I left.

16 years 3 months ago

**********

******** I'm still rocking from side to side with the music i was listening to and I wanted to close my eyes and I couldn't because then I would have only heard the music and that would've stopped without the words. Beautiful magics mona xxxx love judy

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16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Judy friend

Yes I got your message and Happy Early Birthday celebration for you. What was the song you were listening to by the way. I hope you have a wonderful day and will be looking out for your next beauty! Thank you again. Much love sent your way Mona xoxoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 3 months ago

silly

the music was from the words of your song silly lol judy

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16 years 3 months ago

LOL and may we hear you sing this tune

That was a compliment and oh so sweet you are, now I need to hear you singing it, you never know it could be a hit!!! lol You keep on singing and until next time kiss the rose. love mona xx0x0xxxx00x Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 3 months ago

Moonstruck Mona

Ann of Norway You have a good wine and company and enjoy your companion's presence in your lovely way of saying it Magic Mona, you really are such a lovely person. I hear the birds singing there in Florida. None here yet, its too cold. "our hearts feeling entwined"....feel entwined? Love to you from Anna

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16 years 3 months ago

Our hearts entwined

Thank you Ann and I just wrote this not in specifics for any lover or anything else but the feel of the write for me and the once before nites LOL Our hearts feeling entwined meaning it was there but then it was gone perhaps in the moons hazy lights or gone in a moment of feeling it. However I so love your visit and yes the birds are tuning theirselves up for springtime will soon arrive, I see it and feel in in the air, no more cold it has been a long winter for sure for alot of us. Love Magics02 mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

M

16 years 3 months ago

Yes please

We don't need the cops coming over to break up that fight do we?? lol Your good Indi thats all there is to it and heck with them if they want to start a rumor, sometimes thats all people have time to do besides fuss and muss, fits or mits,,lol thank you Indi I love your conclusion to my heartfelt poem. ciao bella Mona

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16 years 3 months ago

wowo Indi

Yes you got it right on the money maybe I should have had you write it here. LOL You are so much in tune with reality down to earth, honest, gentleman I think out there in this whole universe. wowo mona go girl and Indi you go Indi you know just what to write and say at the same time. Bravo my Magnifico Ciao Bella here, Ms Mona x0xx00x0x

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Mariposa

16 years 3 months ago

I'm jealous!

Your poem made me long for a date on a boardwalk on a lovely night of "moonstruck", and I agree it's cool that you use it as a noun. You conveyed so well this feeling of love. Why do you say "once again?" Good night (coincidentally) Jhena Mariposa

M

16 years 3 months ago

Your too cute

Yes on the boardwalk sounds good, Once again I say because that is what it used to be (good catch) to be again. lol love, magicso2 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

M

16 years 3 months ago

You are too two funny

I love it you Crud make such good replies and comments, You should produce a chapbook with all of them. Love Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona

I really loved this one but your format needs a clean up ... sooooo I did it for you ... just copy and paste Amore my friend, it’s love once again The moon has struck, clock strikes twice Amore my love, I give you my hand Our lovestruck is here, we share the night This love always on time, never too late We break bread together, we drink of fine wines Sitting closely, our hearts feeling entwined Clutching each other’s embrace, your’s and mine Amore my friend, this love never to end When moon is high, and wines are chilled We snuggle together just round the bend It’s our time together, for never to be stilled The clock strikes, all love surpasses All fears of darkness forgotten and away Together, bread and wine of many glasses Staring in your eyes, sights glimmer of moon’s haze Amore my friend, it’s love once again my love in holding your sweet caress We sit here my soulmate, my everlasting friend Moonstruck shines together, forever till the end.. there you go lovely ... good morning lol love Jayne-Chloe

M

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks

I have been having a problem with format. It comes out great in word and then when I go paste it this is how it comes out. I shall try again. I think I need to work with that break thing in here also maybe that is why I keep messing up the format. Thanks I will try again Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

16 years 3 months ago

You got it right this time

You got it right this time lovely and theres an extra star for the edit :) Love Jayne-Chloe

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16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Jane

Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.