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Mar 06, 2010
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Holy
This is not a holy thing to see
Living rough in Charing Cross
Cardboard boxes
Ice-cold stone
Eeking out some pavement to call your own..
This is not a holy thing to see
Doped-up mum
With no home of her own
Dragging her kids like chattel
Totally alone..
This is not a holy thing to see
Man slaughters his woman and children too
Deep in the mire of depression
No help in time to draw him out
Nor save their lives
Despite the signs
These are not holy things to see
In a land of Hope and Glory
In a land full of riches
And justice...
And all
Living rough in Charing Cross
Cardboard boxes
Ice-cold stone
Eeking out some pavement to call your own..
This is not a holy thing to see
Doped-up mum
With no home of her own
Dragging her kids like chattel
Totally alone..
This is not a holy thing to see
Man slaughters his woman and children too
Deep in the mire of depression
No help in time to draw him out
Nor save their lives
Despite the signs
These are not holy things to see
In a land of Hope and Glory
In a land full of riches
And justice...
And all
— sharon-rose, Mar 06, 2010
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magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Wow
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Magic
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Yes I totally agree with you
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Amen!~A“If parents really
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Lisa
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks A
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
That’s the problem. Most
Bernard Shaw
16 years 3 months ago
You have described a short incidence in my long life Bern
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
Thank-you Bernard
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
Hi again Rosina
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Yes, but getting those views
Bernard Shaw
16 years 3 months ago
Cardboard box
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Bern
Bernard Shaw
16 years 3 months ago
Rosina and Cardboard Box.
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
I'm sure you're right
Harvey
16 years 3 months ago
I'm not out to make enemies but . . .
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Very Well said Harvey
sharon-rose
16 years 3 months ago
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