This day of sky

my lonliness has grown
and sails filled and blown
I am travelling
sad and free

the infitessimal destiny
wander
through streets full
and unemcumbered

my shadow and me
we know how it seems
for all we feel
is the we

our hand sometimes upon
the wheel

while we whirl in the eye of
the pearl

the dust in kindomships grace
lay beneath me
and too beneath lay
when all has
come

and gone
on a travellers day

— Esker, Mar 06, 2010

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Critiques

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Just cleaned up a few

Just cleaned up a few spelling errors for you esker but a really good write my lon(e)liness has grown and sails filled and blown I am travelling sad and free the infi(n)tesimal destiny wander('s) through streets full and un(en)cumbered my shadow and me we know how it seems for all we feel is the we our hand(s) sometime upon the wheel while we whirl in the eye of the pearl the dust in kindom(-)ships grace lay beneath me and too beneath lay when all has come and gone on a travellers day Hope you didnt mind me tweaking it a little bit lol kind regards Jayne-Chloe

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Smiles U2.~A“If parents

Smiles U2. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti