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the taste is bittersweet; under this poets tongue
I have been unfaithful,
under a curtain of night
even as you laid
a fingers breath from my hem,
he stole my affection
in sheared moments of Ecstasy
~~~
We came together
an eclectic mix,
liquid methane and fire,
once we had merged
our passion ignited
after the flames died down,
I took out a staff of creation
combining oceans of words
with waves baring
the muniments to love,
in a age of stars
nestled in black petals
and in the prayer rolls of galaxies,
my letters of adoration
shimmer
you can use a finger
and trace the path of my desires
through night
mouths of dark and light
kissed,
soft and gentle,
to a fevered fumbling
making poems slide out
between a tongue of your breath
and my lips,
I create my own beginnings,
until the end is whispers
I ask for no Taj Mahal
or crown of Sheba,
what use have I for a thousand ships
hulls busting agape with ardor,
I only yearn to taste the first syllable
that flows from the tip of your tongue
my lust twirls dream-catchers
and yet I crave the rush of methane,
my lust sparks to mark the darkness
with shooting streams of love
~~~
Neruda whispers to me of scents loosed
on the float of lemon flowers,
his rest begun
in a the soft valley
of my heart, and
he knew not how,
or when or from where
but from the other side
he found a way to my heart
timing the tide,
his words now rest under my tongue
and are savored with passion,
I am reduced, again and again
all this?
is only in my mind
Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Your words bring honour to
CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
your lucky i aint the
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Now we talked about this
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Wellll! Nice collage Lady
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mum
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
I’m not sure about this
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear The One
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
I expect nothing big, I
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
LOL I expect more from
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
okay, good on ya mate,
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Ahhhhh but thats the thing
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
I rarely let mine sit, I
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Hmmm I would suggest you
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
I agree, actually march 4th
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Your wish is my command …
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Great and wonderful poetess Jayne Chloe
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dearest Ann
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Bittersweet...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Ahhhhh Gee your words are