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the taste is bittersweet; under this poets tongue

I have been unfaithful,
under a curtain of night
even as you laid
a fingers breath from my hem,

he stole my affection
in sheared moments of Ecstasy
 
~~~
 
We came together
an eclectic mix,
liquid methane and fire,
once we had merged
our passion ignited
 
after the flames died down,
I took out a staff of creation
combining oceans of words
with waves baring
the muniments to love,
in a age of stars
nestled in black petals
and in the prayer rolls of galaxies,
my letters of adoration
shimmer
 
you can use a finger
and trace the path of my desires
through night
 
mouths of dark and light
kissed,
soft and gentle,
to a fevered fumbling
making poems slide out
between a tongue of your breath
and my lips,
I create my own beginnings,
until the end is whispers
 
I ask for no Taj Mahal
or crown of Sheba,
what use have I for a thousand ships
hulls busting agape with ardor,

I only yearn to taste the first syllable
that flows from the tip of your tongue
my lust twirls dream-catchers
and yet I crave the rush of methane,
 
my lust sparks to mark the darkness
with shooting streams of love
 
~~~
 
Neruda whispers to me of scents loosed
on the float of lemon flowers,
 
his rest begun
in a the soft valley
of my heart, and
he knew not how,
or when or from where
 
but from the other side
he found a way to my heart
timing the tide,
his words now rest under my tongue
and are savored with passion,
I am reduced, again and again
 
all this?
is only in my mind

— Seren, Mar 06, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Your words bring honour to

Your words bring honour to my humble door may the green flow free and the glass fill with s'more lol thankies Eph your a funny buggar I love your visits love Jayne-Chloe x x
C

CyberSpace

16 years 3 months ago

your lucky i aint the

your lucky i aint the jealous type,much lol love hubby xoxoxoxoxox
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Wellll! Nice collage Lady

Wellll! Nice collage Lady Jayne. It would make a master (or mistress) poet jealous. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mum

I read all the poetry by you to him and by others to others and its natural to want my own I guess, this was a response to your Neruda Poem lol hope your having a good night ... and maybe a little hint lol:P much love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

I’m not sure about this

I'm not sure about this line "an eclectic mix," It sounds a little better as electric to me. Haha That would make you a spark plug, and him a wire Lol. Anyways another good write from you JC :P You seem like you can write about anything, you should write about spoons next! I'll write one too, and we will see whose the master of the spoons, Sorry I'm in a really random mood today.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear The One

eclectic describes perfectly what I want to say there ... electric is not what i was going for but I appreciate the idea I had actually considered electric when I was doing the edit ... I will write you a spoon poem but I am in the middle of working on three others at the moment lol ... so will get to it on the morrow thanks for your comments and ideas they are always welcome Love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

LOL I expect more from

LOL I expect more from myself lol perfectionist I am :P ;) i will get on it tonight and see if i cant get it finished and post love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Ahhhhh but thats the thing

Ahhhhh but thats the thing we should be showing off not making each other look bad lmao just joking but I wont get it done tonight my attention was drawn to another one thats close to finish and it took over but I will post for sure tomorrow night ... a slow cooked pot always tastes sweeter ... you know my writes are always at least one two weeks old lol I took some advice a while ago its a rare thing for me to post the day I write it anymore lol love JayCee x x x
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

I rarely let mine sit, I

I rarely let mine sit, I twist, and shake, if what I've baked isn't delicious, and if it isn't I'd rather it goes out, so that I may cook another with less mistakes, and better taste :P Then again I believe everything that I've baked is eloquently delicious, and thus is my vanity. :P
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Hmmm I would suggest you

Hmmm I would suggest you sometimes let them age like a fine wine lol because sometimes the following inspiration can rewrite a dull write into something fabulous love and hugs JayCee x x x
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

I agree, actually march 4th

I agree, actually march 4th I went trough my old work, and made it all better, I think that I did them some good, however I still have a poem that I'm not sure whether to let it be, or what maybe you can help :P "Your hero" is the one that's causing me trouble.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Your wish is my command …

Your wish is my command ... I will copy it and take it apart for you and see what can be done lol ... give me the night its getting late or early depends on which way you look at it lol 1am here now love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dearest Ann

Your sigh is my applause ... thankyou my darlin big love Jayne-Chloe x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Bittersweet...

Breathtaking! Sighhhhh.... Electric would be the other word. Higgest bugs, and lotta love, ~ Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Ahhhhh Gee your words are

Ahhhhh Gee your words are music to this poets eyes ... thank you so much biggest hugs of love Jayne-Chloe x x x