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Your Cupid's Bow

The sapphire diamonds
That tell your story.
Slowly but instantly
Come a light.

That unnaturally perfect
Cupid's bow
Flicks at the corners
As you fill my life.

Those soft firm hands
Take a hold of mine,
And I know for sure,
You'll never leave my side.
— evie.haywood, Mar 05, 2010

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Sweet and lovely

Great one short lines great expressions1!! magics02 xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Delightful. The second

Delightful. The second stanza was very very good. ~A p.s. sapphire "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Oooh so lovely and

Oooh so lovely and romantic...lucky girl...like your picture...so pretty. Rosina xena465
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jim

16 years 3 months ago

lovelyjim

lovely jim
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poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

Evie

Love that first stanza very nice use of the language Chrys