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Company Fifty Four.

Company Fifty-Four.Marching through the desert sands,
Was the Company Fifty-Four.
Here no green and pleasant lands.
Just the barren desert floor.
Full packs on our bent and tired backs,
A rifle and fixed bayonet at the ready.
The deadly fear of an Arab attack,
With nerves that were not too steady.
Bidons of water warm not fresh,
To quench an everlasting thirst.
We were caught in the Legions mesh,
Wondering who would die the first.
Mile after mile marching at the Legions pace,
Ammunition weighing us down.
The Sergeant Chef with a grim face,
Driving us on past the next town.
The Company Fifty-Four was to replace the dead and the dying,
Of a God forsaken fort in the middle of no-where.
A handful of survivors were on our Company relying,
Legionnaires some that by now did not any more care.
Onward we marched to the refrain of a Legion song,
Desperate with throats parched from the dust and the heat.
None of us in this land did belong,
We just followed our sore aching feet.
The fort came into sight the Tricolour still flying,
We had arrived in the nick of time.
We buried the dead and tended the dying.
Before we washed off the march's grime.
Sentries were placed at strategic points,
Machine guns brought into position.
We hasted to tend our aching joints,
And re-cursed the heavy ammunition.
Two days to build new defences and repair the fort,
Then the Arabs attacked yet once again.
With a new strength we somehow fought,
There was no time to take real aim.
Now there were Arabs dead and dying,
Brave men without a doubt.
This was honesty without lying.
As their warriors were slowly wiped out.

© Bernard Shaw

— Bernard Shaw, Mar 05, 2010

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Harvey

16 years 3 months ago

Intense!

You knocked me on my back! Great drama and real grit depicting the reality of war (wars then as well as now).
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 3 months ago

bernard shaw. Thank you

bernard shaw. Thank you Harvey, I have written a few army poems you might like this one written some years ago. Steady Comrades, Steady. A rucksack on my back, With automatic rifle at the ready. Waiting for the next attack, Steady Comrades, steady. Bayonets are fixed, Hand grenades placed ready. Our feelings are mixed, Steady Comrades, steady. Flares light up the night sky, All hell breaks loose we are ready, We know that many will die, Steady Comrades, steady. Should I be one of the first to fall? Let all know that I was ready. Hear once again my call, Steady Comrades, steady. © Bernard Shaw Bern.
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Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

A little bit of Gunga Din, a

A little bit of Gunga Din, a little bit of George Bernard Shaw. Welcome! ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 3 months ago

bernard shaw. Thank you for

bernard shaw. Thank you for your welcome, Gunga Din was one of my favourite films of yesteryear. Your name suggests India; krishnamurta Lovely Country India with one of the best arithmatic systems that I have ever seenHave a nice evening Bern
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Brilliant. I like the way

Brilliant. I like the way you ended the poem. In war we are all warriors and it's no great pleasure to have to kill each other, but peace must be restored. Rosina xena465