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Seren
Seren
Mar 05, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

smoking glass

wash me,
in the light of your smile
let its cascade bloody my cheeks


cleanse me,
with the love of your eyes,
smooth your gaze to hold my thighs


heal me,
with the touch of your lips,
shimmer a spectrum on my fingertips


hold me,
I'll turn to glass
and shatter in your arms


watch,
I don't get under your skin  

— Seren, Mar 05, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

ooh la la!Me thinks you have

ooh la la! Me thinks you have gotten under many skins.... Lord, I think this is one of my favourite favourite Seren poems. Love, Mummy p.s. I'll "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Mum I just noticed it

Thanks Mum I just noticed it and fixed it glad you liked this one wasnt sure whether to post it or not lol I wrote it ages ago and dusted it off tonight I am smiling at both your reactions this ones never seen the light of day before lol love you Jayne-Chloe x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Get off the floor woman lol

Get off the floor woman lol hahaha thanks for the comment so happy you liked this one I sat on it for months and didnt know if it was any good lol much love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x P.S just left a message on your newie .. ;)
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Nice Seren

Good one again for your pile there Seren, Hope this is finding you feeling a little better as the days go forward. Love In Friendship magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

OH its not a pile anymore

OH its not a pile anymore Mona its a mountain lol Ive got over 800 poems finished now but less than three hundred on here lol sooo the pile will grow ... glad you liked this one ... kind regards Jayne-Chloe
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Jayne

I love this! Very descriptive! Love, Cat p.s. You still owe me a p.m.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Cat

I am glad you liked this one huni Did you not get my email I sent you one the other day ??? p.s if you didnt message me and Ill resend Love Jayne-Chloe x x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dearest

Yes, I got your e-mail. But it didn't tell me what you were going into the hospital to have done. It also didn't tell me when your book is coming out or what it is called. I wish you all the best. Love, Cat