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Mar 04, 2010
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MAGNITUDE
wanders morning risen smiling
reach out and touch the glasses
slip the wallet
smooth the dress
zip zips and clasp clasps
pray
honour
breath in
listening with ears
eyes
senses
the heat of sun
this birth instrument
to life
take a jacket if rains
should cry upon the mists
of fine crown
palatial drives down
shanty towns
talismen tokens swinging from
sculpted rear view mirrors
like Spitfire warrior
gleaming perspex
our music throbs
we shuttle shunt and scream
our hoarse voice rider
rubber
past flaming gas plant vents
and the window mirror eyes
of facories half vacant
dreaming of that focused
closeness
our selves we want
nurtured
attended
held
we are magnitude magnetrons
drawn
— Esker, Mar 04, 2010
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Critiques
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Very well done :) Deep and
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
I drink night visions and choke on the crisp fire of hearts heat