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The Letter
She sat quietly with pencil and paper
while her mother did the ironing.
It was common practise for the child.
She often enjoyed drawing.
But today she didn’t sketch, she scribbled,
making neat loops between the lines.
“I’m writing a letter to Nana,” she said.
“'Because I really miss her sometimes.”
Her tiny tongue writhed around, in and out,
of her pursed rosebud mouth
as she thought of the things that she wanted to say
then carefully wrote them out.
She must’ve had a whole lot to tell
for she’d soon filled up three foolscap pages
of beautiful loops neatly strung in a row.
Then she focused on it for ages.
She curled round her finger a golden blonde lock
and gently pulled at her hair.
Then for a while her deep sea green eyes
stared vacantly into the air.
The pencil was waved around and around
as she sat there contemplating.
Then her shoes drummed the table in rhythmic tattoo
as she returned to her creation.
She wriggled a bit, between lots of head scratching,
and carefully looked over her letter.
Her cute freckled nose wrinkled up while her mind
decided if she could be neater.
She gnawed a little on the end of the lead.
Holding the paper, she rocked to and fro.
And then with a shrug of her four year old shoulders
resolved it was ready to go.
To the editor that is. For she slipped off her chair
and carried the missive to Mother.
“Before we post it, I want to be sure,
(but I don’t want to be a bother,)
that Nana will understand what I’ve said,”
she quietly asked Mum’s deciphering.
“Would you read it to me? I’m only little you see.
So I can only write reading, I can’t yet read writing.”
Critiques
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Cute :)
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so very much for
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
You’re very welcome, thank
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Yes I agree totally… this
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much Rosina.
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
This is so….precious. You
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I read a lot of narrative
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Such a lovely thing to say
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
You’ve go a nerve to talk
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Another great one here
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
So great to be here Magics,
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Your too nice Troy me
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
I Love Your Writing, Judy
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so very much
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I love you Seren. You make
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
I know it's going somewhere
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks for caling by Mark,
Mariposa
16 years 3 months ago
Adorable!
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks mariposaI kinda like
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Little rosebud of a mouth,
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Julie. Your visits
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Congrats YOur in the Spotlight
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
All in the one little letter the innocence of the child.
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
SUPERB, or exquisite, wonder-full Judyanne
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
annanya you are a gem..