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Mar 04, 2010
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THERE'S A CLOUD OUT THERE
There's a cloud out there filled with some dustRains pouring down, dwelling amongst us
For flowers of spring will soon sprout many a seedWe chase away clouds, however dark they may seem
For many a cloudy day, too far and in betweenHave gotten in the way, for this we have seen
Will always remember the sun shall outshineWiping those rains from those very dark times
There's a cloud out there, this is for sureSoon spring awakens the flower, so fragrant, so pure
The birds are back freely flying all around
For gone are the cloudy tears falling to ground
Always share the rainbow with someone else
For it's not always right to only think of oneself
Share all the roses, share all the pains
As the sun outshines, help to clear the dark rains..
Remember the good times, for clouds shall disappearThe rains soon to dry up many a long winter's tear
Reach out to someone and grab their handTry to share friendship, to love and understand
For cloudy days are sure to still come
As the spring awakens the almighty sun
Rejoice in sharing, for the brightness is real
For clouds out there, shall not always prevail..
3.04.10 mms
For flowers of spring will soon sprout many a seedWe chase away clouds, however dark they may seem
For many a cloudy day, too far and in betweenHave gotten in the way, for this we have seen
Will always remember the sun shall outshineWiping those rains from those very dark times
There's a cloud out there, this is for sureSoon spring awakens the flower, so fragrant, so pure
The birds are back freely flying all around
For gone are the cloudy tears falling to ground
Always share the rainbow with someone else
For it's not always right to only think of oneself
Share all the roses, share all the pains
As the sun outshines, help to clear the dark rains..
Remember the good times, for clouds shall disappearThe rains soon to dry up many a long winter's tear
Reach out to someone and grab their handTry to share friendship, to love and understand
For cloudy days are sure to still come
As the spring awakens the almighty sun
Rejoice in sharing, for the brightness is real
For clouds out there, shall not always prevail..
3.04.10 mms
— magics02, Mar 04, 2010
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Critiques
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
It has the essence of spring
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Beautiful blue sky, birds
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Kaily
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Yes Theo we can only hope this for all
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Really lovely magics. Do you
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
No
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Ahhhh My Sweet Friend
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Yes Rainbows to share
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Ms Judy, I Love That
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Why thank you Venus It’s
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Flows like a breath of fresh
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Xena
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Glenda Cat!!