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THERE'S A CLOUD OUT THERE

There's a cloud out there filled with some dustRains pouring down, dwelling amongst us

For flowers of spring will soon sprout many a seedWe chase away clouds, however dark they may seem
 
For many a cloudy day, too far and in betweenHave gotten in the way, for this we have  seen

Will always remember the sun shall outshineWiping those rains from those very dark times

There's a cloud out there, this is for sureSoon spring awakens the flower, so fragrant, so pure

The birds are back freely flying all around
For gone are the cloudy tears falling to ground
 Always share the rainbow with someone else
For it's not always right to only think of oneself

Share all the roses, share all the pains
As the sun outshines, help to clear the dark rains..

 Remember the good times, for clouds shall disappearThe rains  soon to dry up many a long winter's tear

Reach out to someone and grab their handTry to share friendship, to love and understand
 For cloudy days are sure to still come
As the spring awakens the almighty sun 

Rejoice in sharing, for the brightness is real
For clouds out there, shall not always prevail..

3.04.10  mms
— magics02, Mar 04, 2010

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sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

It has the essence of spring

It has the essence of spring dripping from every line, thank goodness winter is over, I've had enough of this snow stuff, and the cold weather!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Beautiful blue sky, birds

Beautiful blue sky, birds singing, snow melting. Anna doing the happy dance with your poem. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Kaily

Thanks you for the visit. Did everything to flow okay. I been tweaking it here and there as I just wrote it while sitting here not on paper just in mind thoughts. Thank you again for the lovely accolade! OM Love, Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes Theo we can only hope this for all

Thank you again for the visit and the positive comment. And now you have to expose the eyes and the smile, LOL Now I know that is not a dinosaur wearing that helmet. LOL just kidding you here Will be back later for visit.. magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Really lovely magics. Do you

Really lovely magics. Do you know the song? - If we didn't have rain then we wouldn't have flowers if we didn't have rain then we couldn't have showers there'd be no shiny nook there'd be no bubbly brook there'd be no fish to catch on the end of a hook we couldn't wash our hands and face we'd be as black as ink all day we'd face the barren waste looking for a nice cool drink so we gotta have rain every now and then to make the whole world shine and everything will turn out fine. lol Judy
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

No

But I do now and what a lovely verse that was. Thank you for the stars and comments I do appreciate the time you took for the read and visit, Love Magics02 xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
VX

Venus x

16 years 3 months ago

Ahhhh My Sweet Friend

Ahhhh My Sweet Friend, you are a ray of sunshine on a cool, windy day. I love this Mona, the rhyme and flow is delightful and the message you send is so uplifting, in so many ways. I Love the duality you have brought to this writing. Beautiful and Inspirational pen. Well Done! **Smiles** "Always share the rainbow with someone else For it’s not always bright to only think of oneself." Rainbows have a special meaning to me. When ever I see one, I will share it with you. Yigaquu osaniyu adanvto adadoligi nigohilvi nasquv utloyasdi nihi (May the Great Spirit's Blessings Always Be With You)
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes Rainbows to share

Hello Venus friend and how nice for you to stop by again, thank you also for the Indian verse May the Great Spirit's Blessing Be Always With You too!! Now if I can only hear you say that in Indian language, bravo Venus lady bravo to you. I am so happy that you liked it as I wrote it the words just came to mind and onto screen, not too much thought process just flowing out of the mind so to speak. Thank you, thank you for your lovely sentiments. Will be looking out for the rainbow with you on the other end afar but close. I have many a rainbow poem in my journals also. ciao Indian style LOL Love Magics02 xxoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Flows like a breath of fresh

Flows like a breath of fresh air...I feel the spring coming through your lovely poem...magic...Magics. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Xena

Your always so honest with your comments and I hope the sun is shining in your neck of the woods there. Love in Friendship Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona

A lovely poem, just what is needed for this time of year. The snow is melting and the trees may well start to bud. I am in hopes that it is an early spring and March will not provide any unwanted snow storms. Always, Cat
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Glenda Cat!!

You know I always see your pic and it reminds me of Glenda the beautiful witch on the Wird of Oz movie, Honestly you look so much like her and now where is your magical wand? Yes I too hope spring will be much hope and new birth to all. A renewal of love and friendship spread around the world, I also can not wait to do my gardens of roses and all my beautiful flowers spread outside the pool cage. Thank you for stopping and check out my coffee poem I just did, I just had fun this morning with it. It is good to laugh when you been shut in all week from sickness. Love in Friendships Mona xoxoxoox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.