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greeneyes
greeneyes
Mar 04, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Apollo's Moment


Prisms of color
Bright orange burst through the night sky
A greeting at dawn.


— greeneyes, Mar 04, 2010

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

brilliantly beautiful I love your shorty's ... you always pack such a punch into your few words ... loved it ... love and big hugs Jayne x x x I just noticed is the middle line 7 or 8 ? syl's ?? maybe its me Ill have a look after ive had a shower and brigthened up lol
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Love it, beautiful

Love it, beautiful Haiku! ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes a haiku and a good one at that

It has to be our space ship here at Cape Canaveral that you write this one of. We see it alot and the nightime launces are always so beautiful great job here green eyes. magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

How did I miss this a week!!

How did I miss this a week!! OMG Green eyes. I love it. I love haiku's. Not all of them. But this one ROCKED. This is the second time this week I have opened a poem with Apollo in the title and been floored. Apollo as dawn. I think it might be easy to guess. I LOVE THE DAWN. And apollo, and haiku's. And prisims. I loved it. Did I say love enough, I just wanted to make sure you got that I loved it. Because I loved it!! Julie D.D.
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

Just like you, full of life and color. Love Lyz. XX