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clouds

the clouds learn how to forsake themselves 
hiding  into shapeless  hills with out rain
they impress the needless  street below
with shadows of separation that hurry past
another way to say good-by with out tears

the sky knows how alone the earth feels
and traces little patterns into my steps
that bump into me going the other way
it was on the wrong side of your sighs
that you brought me back to my self

I learned how to walk with rain
falling silver to meet the light
to return  the music of your touch
as you find the flowers of the world
there are always flowers somewhere
where you are in the world

I am always with rain clouds


 

— Orphani, Mar 04, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Barry

You've asked me; 'why do you cry' I reply only the sky knows this and you say you require the blue of day to fade I reply, "it begun at dawn" thats the beginning to another poem I started last night Dont ask me why but I felt a connection to this one and mine lol weird thought strings all over the world interlaced and overlaid love and big hugs jayne-Chloe
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I like the flow of this

I like the flow of this poem...it's a lovely visionary stroll through the rain. Rosina xena465
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Raindrops keep falling my

Raindrops keep falling my head... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ejR01W8fks I love you, Anna "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
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ziggy

16 years 3 months ago

hi

hi barry i luv the theme and there is something about how in the first lines you mention the clouds hiding into shapeless hills without rain , and then your last lines says " i am always with rain clouds " a great subject good read chEERS ,,,,,,,,,, zigs
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Barry It must be a cloudy theme day today

I like this one Barry, seems a few of us were on the poetic cloud euphoria today as I wrote a cloud one too this day. We may always walk in the clouds or in a cloud, however we also may walk out of one when the sun pulls us through. Great write Mr. O magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.