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My Exception

Dirty Blonde hair,
Gistening blue eyes.
Average build.
Five foot five.

You're the total opposite
Of what I expected.
You are
My only exception.
— evie.haywood, Mar 03, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

You can’t always get what

You can't always get what you want, but it seems you're content enough with waht you got evie. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Cute poem here

I like it it. It short and sweet and right to the point, good job here magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

Evie

You leave your reader wondering, as already stated it is always the opposite of what you expect. MORE!!!!!lol Chrys