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Mar 03, 2010
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meadows and tufts
my heart floats on your sea of fire,
my Love,
a seagull
swoops down, shrieking
grey clouds,
I am undisturbed,
the sparrow and I
sing vespers
a nesting urge
I am adrift in a fragrance,
green, springtime becomes
me... meadows and tufts
of flame.
my Love,
a seagull
swoops down, shrieking
grey clouds,
I am undisturbed,
the sparrow and I
sing vespers
a nesting urge
I am adrift in a fragrance,
green, springtime becomes
me... meadows and tufts
of flame.
— Kailashana, Mar 03, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Mum
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Great one my Kaily
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Yes, the suspended feeling of mother earths expressions
RobertKnott
16 years 3 months ago
yes,
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Congrates on the spotlight
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
You guys are
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Wait, shouldn’t I be
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Beautiful and deserves the
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
leymantra
Arrow
16 years 3 months ago
One of the things that makes your poetry so
Rob Graber
16 years 3 months ago
Unusual
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
The earth sings it’s song
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Anna
Ailill
16 years 3 months ago
good poem
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you all for reading.