magics02

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WE WALK THE TALK

We walk with a tall stickNot to take a single lickThe over sharing love of heartMay sometimes tear us apart We walk a long mileStick around for awhileFor tiring may get oldGiveth one, a time to unfold We walk with head highFor a reason, for a whyProud of you, proud of meOneness together, for all you see

We walk the talkAnd walk the walkHowever so blatant
Not too expectating

However severe
Knows no fear
We walk the talkAnd balk the walk.

— magics02, Mar 02, 2010

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Lovely

Yes so right, so right. Cold is the night, warmth is the friendship xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

buggles

16 years 3 months ago

very nice,

thank you for the nice read, I really enjoyed it, may God walk at your shoulder and the devil kiss your ass....Eddy

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Huggles buggles your too funny

You make me laugh and thank you for visiting again, this was one I did last night in about a minute so I have not had time to do anything else with it so maybe leave it alone. I hope you dont mind I call you huggles since I see you wear a big smile and know you have a big heart as well,I love the attitude you share. Love Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

Venus x

16 years 3 months ago

Hello Mona :-)

"We walk with a tall stick never taking another lick For over sharing love of heart Sometimes tears us all apart" That is so true my dear friend. I don't think we can love to much, but we can love in the wrong way, and that's where the heart break comes in. Nice pen sweetie, A strong woman who stand tall. Well done. Love and hugs, Venus xxx btw, I attended a healing circle tonight, and added your name, so hope you are feeling a bit better. **Smiles**

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Oh my Venus friend

Thank you so much as I just told Buggles I wrote this when I was half a sleep (medication you know) and I so thank you for the comments and feedbacks, and also for the thought in your circle of love and healing sent my way. Grazzi to you my dear friend Until we meet again ciao Love and hugs to you Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Can never love to much or

Can never love to much or too many ... good poem and I love the message at the end kind regards love Jayne-Chloe

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you and what happend to my stars lol

Laughing only kidding I know you shine your star my way and that's all that I care about as I had to shed a moment of sadness as I felt the other night for you, yes the love is a wonderful thing and sometimes we lose sight of it in a moment of adversity or anger. Love conquers all afterwards though, something I learned and was given to me at birth. If we love then we shall live. Vivere my friend. Hope you are feeling better day by day as battles in life are hard enough without any extra's shoved in there. We shall survive for we love and we live. Neoway!! Thanks for visit aussie lady Mona xoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

All I can say to that

All I can say to that is...`Love Concurs All`...heartfelt lovely write. Rosina xena465

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you my Rosalina gal

I appreciate your words and for the way you come to my page all the time. And how are you doing by the way. I would love to see you with the pretty hair to make that sunny smile come alive again and face the world head on. I know how you suffer, as we all have a burden we carry some more heavier then others, It is in this recognition that we learn to comfort, to love and to share. Thinking of you always and wishing you love my Rosalina lady!! Love Mona Marie xoxooxox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

Patricia_legacy

16 years 3 months ago

Nice poem

I found this very inspirational. Just found it kind of hard to read. Need to get my eyes examined. Beautiful poem. Pat

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Pat

I will go in and take it off of bold that may make it better maybe, let me know and thank you for the visit, so nice to see you come by my page, I like to meet new and different established poets as yourself, so nice to have met you. love, magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

anonymous1

16 years 3 months ago

Giveth?

Giveth bothers me here. It's archaic, is it not? If you're looking for two syllables, how about, Give me or Give us? I also think it could have ended with L12 or L13. After that, it's too difficult to read and, I think, too pushy. That's what I think, anyway. Lisa

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you

For the visit and yes I have been tinkering with this one several times as I have reworked it also, Giveth is like giving one rest. No it is not a pushy but if you read it that way it is okay, I may have to come back and work the ending again for the 4th time and I thank you for the feedback, appreciate it, magics02 Learn to live learn to forgive. Life is too short.

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

Though I’m not into god

Though I'm not into god that much, I enjoyed your poem very much Ms. Mona :) A true beauty to behold. Keep writing, I enjoy your work.

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you so much

That is okay your comment however you believe just know love prevails in all of what life offers us. Thank you for stopping by and how are you doing in your writing also? love, magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

I think I’m improving, I

I think I'm improving, I completely rewrote one of my horrible starter poems, gave it some ommph! Haha, why don't you be the judge and check in on me :P

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

I will and I will get back to you okay

I applaud your efforts and all what you have accomplished so far and I will surely go back to read all of your poems and let you know if you so wish me too, Thanks and keep on the writing its great going so far. Much applause for all your hard effort and work on it. Magics does a tap dance for you!! Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

Awwww :) I appreciate the

Awwww :) I appreciate the dance, thanks a lot Ms. Mona Much love, Alex.

Harvey

16 years 3 months ago

Heartfelt!

"The over sharing love of heart, May sometimes tear us apart" Profoundly true, when love turns into possessiveness (my my, so many sses in that word I feel like I'm hissing whenever I use it!) I'm new here and this poem appears to have some history I may not grasp but the message doesn't suffer.

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Welcome Harvey

Yes glad to see you on board here at Neo Poet. Alot of great poetry in here and happy to see visit my poem. And on the over sharing love of heart may mean many different things as in... you share your heart and soul with one or ones and then they or them may shear it down to a thistle leaving it torn like a shattered glass...broken only to mend itself again... I dont know if that makes any sense to you as it's meaning can be varied in it's interpretations. Anyhow so glad to see you Harvey and loved your poem about "POE". Thank you for the lovely commentary. Love in friendship always magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 3 months ago

good in contents and coining

good in contents and coining wards

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you R.M.

Yes I appreciate your comments and I have to understand what coining wards or words means. I just sit here and I write whatever is coming to mind at the moment and then sometimes I sit with one pen and pad and go to it. Most of my stuff is free style, as it comes as I feel it or sense it. Thank you for the visit back to my pages. love Magics02 xoxoxoxo

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Just like you said in baseball

I just thought I would throw a curve ball in there and you were right to get it balk as in balking or sulking or balking the walk as in baseball, however the reader interprets it then that is how it is meant, Now please no balking me okay, not today I have a headache lol love ya indi xoxoxohugs and more hugs out to you and Brina