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Dawn's quest, Part 3
Dawn’s quest, part 3
Seliq wa till laid on a hill
intent on hunting his game
possessed with concentrated zeal
nothing felt quit the same
Grandfather had dreamed a gift
not of hide or of bone beads
he would have to be swift
if he had a chance to succeed
Crouched above the baited shore
breathing in shallow breaths
Mattering not that his legs were sore
Resisting the urge to stretch
In came a swooping hawk
landing on half a salmon
this is what he had sought
an engagement gift with talons
He would present her a bird
for considering to be his wife
and upon her anticipated word
she’d agree to complete his life
Netting a hawk is never easy
or usually done in one day
but the results are pleasing
So worth it, in more than one way
His chap’s felt full of sweat
his muscles screamed in agony
he resisted the urge to jump just yet
patience is rewarded handsomely
It was now time to spring his trap
in a simple but quick action
he cut a tight braided strap
before the bird could have a reaction
A sapling snapped back in a flash
pulling from the water a net
the bird jumped back with a splash
it appears they were to both get wet
He launched from his position
quick strides took him to the shore
he had accomplished his mission
he wouldn’t have to wait much more
Her name rolled in his mind
A chant almost heard pure
she is all he ever wanted to find
emotions she could deeply stir
Lay lo la may not remember him
but he sure remembered her
She’d been climbing a cedar limb
whilst he traded with her father
having dimples a mile wide
with a smile of liquid sun
brown eyes he might confide
and wide hips to carry his sons
And with a little good medicine
respect for his maker and tribe
she might just choose him
and consider being his bride
Julie
D.D
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3-1-2010
Critiques
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
A great love poem of
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina, much
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
loving it…. bated breath
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Oh you are so kind, thanks
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Is this about the hawk and the Indian girl
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Well its not about already