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Traum

Throughout the day in the city park

Two colossal Dobermans roam

Sharing the same head, black brow

I walk by, paired beast rears its' regard

Composed lightning, eyes beset 

Gravity insists me to bide, thirty two claws 

Grope slow sand, smitten light snuffed 

Out cold bloody core beating to the

Expected approach,- the giant's lecherous

And Hollow


— doorman, Mar 02, 2010

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Interesting read

I am gazing at this one and read it a few times before I actually got it. I guess I was thrown off a little as the choice of words took me a minute to grab the essence of this write. Will be back for visit again new friend. magics02