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evie.haywood
Mar 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My Drug

The truth is
I'm addicted.
To your smile
And angelic eyes.

The truth is
You're my only vice.
Without you...
If you only knew.

The truth is
You're beautiful to me.
You always will be.
You are my drug.
— evie.haywood, Mar 02, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years 3 months ago

Evie

A pretty little piece, and runs well you just put more of you pieces here for all to read then expand your writing, by looking at others ways of writing, choose a way where you are comfortable, write from the dreams, as you are young, just let the words flow then have a look then edit and post. I find that to put the work on Notepad then copy from there and paste to Neopoet saves a lot of messing around. Have a great time with Neo there are some awsome poets here and it's hard top keep up sometimes but just find your own pace. Yours Ian.T
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evie.haywood

16 years 3 months ago

Ian.T

Thank you. I felt it quite an innocent and young poem, based around quite a common feeling. Either way, I will keep posting: I have many more recently written but not pposted as neo is a rather recent discovery to me. A treasured one none the less. Evie
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

So true…love is a

So true...love is a drug...maybe should be banned...only for some...but not for one like you...so young and beautiful. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Another great one here

Straight out of the box she comes and how lovely she is. Really impressed with your work and will visit your site soon from your profile page. Write on! magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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evie.haywood

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you so much all of

Thank you so much all of you, I haven't been writing for long and it's so nice to see I've found something I enjoy and am good at. :) Also just notice al of your ratings, bit slow there, and thank you so much, it means alot to me. Evie.
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poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

Evie

ok I've come to the end of your poems here. Ian is spot on with his assesment. Try expanding your work Guess what the word of the day is yup MORE Chrys