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Mar 02, 2010
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Throw down the gauntlet
You who essay to command the hawkBrave your bare skin to talons deepFist bunched, arm outstretched toTake her weightKestrel of skied wings and speckled breastYellow legs clasp tight on bloodied arm But she rests on you, calm Golden promise ringsWatching youPiercing beak, fur And blood edged from kill But she rests on you, calm Head cocked to your racing heartYet she rests on youYour skin to her claw a mergerOf folded wings You could bind her to youWith leather jessesBlind her to youWith hooded tie You choose to love her She deftly leans into the windDrifts large circlesStaying with youShe chose youSeabhac, bird of the light.
— seabhac, Mar 02, 2010
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xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Birds of Prey…such beauty
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
When knighthood was in
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Ah were it still so ~A were it still so!
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
I can only speak for myself,
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks ~A
yenti
16 years 3 months ago
Seabhac
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Ian you quiet encouragement is always welcome
yenti
16 years 3 months ago
Seabhac
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
The tenderness and love is
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Barry
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Ahhhhh Seahbac **Smiles**
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
The hares… Invisable
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
I am of American Indian Hertiage
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Venus thank you
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much Seabhac
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
The Hawk and the Eagle
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Magics02
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Such a lovely range of tits
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Awsome. And the imagery is
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Judy
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Seabhac
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
me like
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Cannot believe my comment