My Sweet Daughter

If you see a flash
A bang and a crash

You know who it is don’t you?

If you see a jump
A thump and a bump

You know who it is don’t you?

If you see a swing
A ping and a zing

You know who it is don’t you?

Yes! It’s my little daughter
All pretty and neat

And everyone says:
“Ah isn’t she sweet.”

— mand, Mar 01, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

Critiques

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mand

Is your little daughter a tomboy? She sounds great and never boring. Always, Cat

mand

16 years 3 months ago

She was very preconscious, full of life and accident prone, and your right life was never boring. Those days have long gone now - she's 31 this year and has a son of her own, he was just the same when he was young, he's 10 now. Thanks for passing by Cat, I alway enjoy your poetry and thanks for commenting. Lot of Love Mand

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is so lovely and cute.

This is so lovely and cute. I can see a little girl bouncing around having the time of her life surround with love. Rosina xena465

mand

16 years 3 months ago

She was the cutest little

She was the cutest little girl, all bouncy and full of life. The time goes by to quickly, before you know it they are all grown up. Thanks for commenting Rosina. Keep safe, Love Mand

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Time passes too fast

Time passes too fast doesn't it? How we all wish that they could stay young forever. Lovely poem Mand Love Judy

mand

16 years 3 months ago

So true! Sometimes I sit

So true! Sometimes I sit and look at old photographs, brings back lot's of memories. Thanks for reading Judy, I look forward to your next poem. Love Mand