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DESTROYED
Oh great tight knot
my heart is bound in braid,
the silky braid of heavy velvet curtains
swayed,
with beats of feelings stayed no longer free’d to blow
about the winds of fate,
how sealed, sated zeal becalmed,
the red of sails left flapping in the breeze
abandoned like the carcass of a whale
on foreign soil,
destroyed
and eaten dry
defeated,
sinews hang the rags of times white hands
that bleaches warmth and truth
reduced
to bland innocence,
uncouth,
nature her ways so beautiful yet cruel
her presence like the fuel of planets
driven,
where all that once was whole and light
is shrivelled up and leaden.
Now howl the theories of life’s boon
through hollowed bones and fissures
the drum beats of doom,
their mellow thud on forms now turned to stone
here lies
what once was life,
so vigourous and free,
now left to rot,
so desolate,
alone.
Critiques
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Mother Earth
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
It is the heart of the I.
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Poignant and melacholic
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Hello AnnI’ve been out of
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
You shower me with the sea spray of my home
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
We are however, in the arms
Esker
16 years 3 months ago
Bring me the Birch wood of Telemark
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
wonderful and descriptive, I
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dearest Ann