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Regarding God
For those with no faith, no persuasion, no creed
the next is a moot question.
But for those who muse on a deity,
one queries some inventions.
I hear some describe Him as merely a force.
And only of good they say.
I hear them scoff at the concept
of a father God per se.
So what then do most consider as true?
Those who believe in a God?
That we are in his image
seems the major message plot.
And that God is perceived as in everything.
So if the belief in God is endorsed,
and if God is seen as in all things
then it can’t be just labelled a force.
A personality He surely must have.
(She must have one too,)
if the leap of faith is taken
and God is seen as true.
For how else can we be part of it?
Them and me and you?
Can we claim distinctiveness
and deny God has it too?
Critiques
Claire Garrard
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Judyanne, I read this
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks for commenting
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
A huge enlightening
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
We are only a very small
mand
16 years 3 months ago
Being made in God’s image,
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
God is life. We, and all
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I have really only taken one
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
A good poem nonetheless Judyanne,
mand
16 years 3 months ago
Yes I see that now, I liked
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks for re-visiting
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Faith in God is one of the
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Rosina. love and