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Pre-dawn
Pre dawn, part two
Lay lo la rose before dawn
As she always tended to do
Crossing the longhouse lawn
prints in the wet morning dew
She went through the woods
And up the small creek
Identifying some local foods
to dig up later next week
Salmon berries, licorice root
Wonderful in hot spice tea
Mushrooms n’ fresh fern shoots
Natures gifts grown free
She followed a trail to the pond
To the head of a dead end clearing
She didn’t plan to take long
Just get rid of the nights smearing
Red clay on her round cheeks
A hint of wild berry dye
a husband she has come to meet
She intended to catch his eye
He had been at the celebration
Nervous looks all around
But thanks to old maid collaboration
old traditions are newly found
They would have a formal meet
His grandfather had a vision
I am left to wait for his greet
Till he fulfills his elders mission
Seliq-wa-till was the chiefs name
With eyes of liquid brown
Tall n’ dark n’ barely tame
His voice was a rumbling sound
She had dreamt of their sons
Several years in the past
Knowing he would be the one
Makes an impression that tends to last
Lay lo la was unaware of the quest
That prolonged their introduction
in the mean time as the clans guest
On hold her knowing seduction
But she had her silent moment
And headed back to the lodge
No one person who owned it
It belonged to the tribe, not odd
Twenty five by eighty was the longhouse
of log, mud and woven thatch work
Sparse, clean, not even a mouse
Not a place some shadow could lurk
She pulled back the fur curtain
To the aroma of wood and smoke
A dog raised his head, uncertain
Half a grumble in the back of his throat
She dug in her cloak for a treat
She knew how to make friend
With just a tid bit of dried meat
Those growls were quick to end
Julie
D.D.
2/26/2010 first poem on my new computer.
Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Perfumes of the fruits and clay earthiness
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you sweet Ann, I have
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Your comment it stars in my
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Looking forward to part 3
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Judy, Thanks. And I hope
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Judy, Thanks. And I hope
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Great hob part 2 dd
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Go for it magic! I would