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My Pillow Friend

I loved my pillow on my bed
Soft and comfy for my head.

It was my special pillow friend
Who stopped me going round the bend.

It helped me with my creaking bones
Eavesdropped on my rambling moans.

Propped me up when I was down
Produced a smile from a frown.

Calmed my anger, encouraged dreams
Motivated creative schemes.

A gentle friend who heard my fears
When contrite absorbed my tears.

Yes! together we had some fun
Numerous battles fought and won.

How sad I was at it’s demise
It was my comfort and my prize.

But when it’s guts came spilling out
Beyond repair without a doubt.

I simply knew this was the end
I miss my lumpy dumpy friend!

— mand, Feb 28, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Very cute and oh-so-sad.

Very cute and oh-so-sad. Reminds me of Eeyore, my son's lumpy dumpy friend of days gone by. http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b201/CDMbeachman/eeyore_rain.jp My daughter was tigger... me.. i'm just lumpy and dumpy nowdays. lol Thank you for your poem. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Kailashana

You have a lovely name. I'm glad you liked the poem, my husband had a favourite pillow that lasted for years, he was quite upset when it drew it's last breath, which was when he was 45 lol.
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Indi, thanks for

Hi Indi, thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked it. Love mand
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Oh no you’ve made me

Oh no you've made me barph, cos I simply had to laugh. lol. Nice to hear from ya. Thanks for commenting. Love Mand
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BrightEyed

16 years 3 months ago

wow

i absolutely love this. its so easy to relate to. brilliant concept and a wonderful read. great work. -bright eyed
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Hello Judy, thanks for your

Hello Judy, thanks for your comment. It's lovely to hear from you. I'll be visiting your site and looking forward to reading more of your poems. Love Mand
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks bright eyed. I love

Thanks bright eyed. I love your picture it's stunning. I look forward to reading some of your poems. Thanks for commenting I appreciate it. Love Mand
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

And the air was full of released feathers

Ann of Norway And the air was full of released feathers:- They took your poems and spread them around the world, the pillow heard your wishes and your dreams, and here at its own end it gave birth to art, to created thoughts and was rewarded in pillow heaven where it surely trurned into the most dazzling of angels ever Mand! Love from Ann.