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WATERFALL FOR ANNA AND BARRY

WATERFALL FOR ANNA AND BARRY 

I reach the edge full flooded 

blown, 

and teeter on the brink,

the view of forest fell and swell

lie there before me

spreading their bloomed presence 

with pride and handsome grace,

the deep and dangerous precipice,

I smoothly glide on stones of granite

washed through years of sun-glazed fire

feldspar quartz and pink bright stone,

admire your surface 

as I roam about your shelf

then down to other things much deeper than myself

there are the banks of wild thyme, 

cotton grass and moss

where sprays of tiny fountains fall from my embrace

star spangled, dazzling, intimate cascades

under the fallen tree I tumble dancing wildly, 

madly, free

then into creviced walls of shale I flee, 

oh god-like presence

there beside the lee,

your dark embrace where squeeze 

the leaves of tiny plants release,

they twinkle in the swoon of berries 

rocked in rhythmical unison

the eddies of your cervical room, 

the womb of valleys worshipped groom,

his bride the visions there created

exceeding all that stories tell,

as prince and princess columbine entwine

and reach the golden plains of the divine.   



— Nordic cloud, Feb 28, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Awww…………..my half

Awww..............my half thanks you for your lovely poem, dear poetess, dear sister, dear friend. Love, Anuska, (hungarian.) "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Wow Anna

What a lovely piece Anna. The wording the descriptive image it places in my head is beautiful, what a nice image poem and lovely written, Love, Mona
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Annuncia

beautiful soul you are lovely poem for them ... read this last night but couldnt comment on my phone ... but I finally made it here :) love and biggest hugs Jayne x x xx