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Feb 27, 2010
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Far & Open
So I’m Facing the ocean
It’s so far and open
It’s got an unparticular motion
Still, ive set devotions
and I’m gunna fill this empty emotion
like a potent potion
making my body feel frozen
its a moment in where im growin
and not knowin in where ill be thrown in
so like shes blowin im showin in not a rodent and i get goin
in a boat in im floatin rowin hopin
my boat stays un broken
plus im high as a totem hopin i dont be chokin
but visnese desguised my eyes like folk man
im elopin when it comes to votin
some rub it in like lotion
but instead ill follow my own promotions
so im not mopein when my teams gropein
always let the green soak in
and never be mean with the dope in
just flowin like the needle when sewin
its teaseable in the way you towin
ill cut you down like im mowin
when it comes to cerebral goins
It’s so far and open
It’s got an unparticular motion
Still, ive set devotions
and I’m gunna fill this empty emotion
like a potent potion
making my body feel frozen
its a moment in where im growin
and not knowin in where ill be thrown in
so like shes blowin im showin in not a rodent and i get goin
in a boat in im floatin rowin hopin
my boat stays un broken
plus im high as a totem hopin i dont be chokin
but visnese desguised my eyes like folk man
im elopin when it comes to votin
some rub it in like lotion
but instead ill follow my own promotions
so im not mopein when my teams gropein
always let the green soak in
and never be mean with the dope in
just flowin like the needle when sewin
its teaseable in the way you towin
ill cut you down like im mowin
when it comes to cerebral goins
— mdehe, Feb 27, 2010
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weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
not this time