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If looks Could kill

Sure, it's a ways off in the distance
it's probably more than we can see,

because our "seeing" is but a function
where "looking", defines you and me.

Like when we think we can hear each other
it's the debate team, and pep rally, combined;

add the drama club, and psychology team,
"clouded issues", is all you'll find.

No one really listens, anymore
they don't "look" at what they, "see",

their vision lacks true focus
blinded, by their own decree !

Folks "hear" when they should be listening
they "see", when they aught to take a "look",

they "talk", without trying to communicate
and then "trust", as if their rival crooks !

I apologize for their unsettling density
eloquence, is not one of their charms,

you'd understand, if you'd sit down and "talk" to them,
if you could do so, without setting off any alarms !

Last night, I happened to realize
that we're helpless, in this regard;

we have the ability to help our fellow man,
lack of communication, is what makes it, "hard".
— docmaverick, Feb 27, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Perceptively written, great

Perceptively written, great observation. Reminds me of a phrase I was taught while learning CPR, look, listen and feel. raskin
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

I can appreciate that, Raskin....

...quite the example ! And, you are very much...correct. "Look, listen, and feel".....DOES sound better than, "see, hear, and touch". Thanks again, for commenting. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 3 months ago

Yes Indeed....

Doc...we feel so much emotion and show it with our eyes...so that even what we are saying with words....can come out differently...and conflict with our words...ah yes...such is the tools of life we are given..I love this. Antoinette Mari
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks, Mom....

...you'll have to read my next entry as, it has a similiar "eye-type" of freeform, if you will. As always, thank-you for your support, and encouragement. I still think you're a tad bit...biased. ;>). "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.